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A fitting ending, I loved it XD

I was a bit 'nooooo, it can't end' when I read the bit about the last chapter at the top but all good things must come to an end and that was beautiful. Thank you for sharing that with us and I look forward to Cost of a secret.

I wasn't expecting this to have such a lovely ending! I enjoyed how Ed was different but the same basic person.

Hooray for human Wrath! I think WinryXWrath is one of my new OTP's now! I think using Gluttony and his power to basically make stones to create all those changes was a good plot device!

*Happy feelings*

I don't suppose I could pester you for the possiblility of and side sotires to this could I? Maybe of Winry and Wrath? *bats eyes at you, chases you around with adorable baby picture*

Oh, and this is StaightCougar on livejournal by the way!

Thank you, this was a really great story. Thank you so much for writing it!

Awww poor Roy, things were just starting to get good for him, or at least as good as things can get with a traumatized boyfriend, but at least then Ed knew he loved Roy. Please update soon!

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
He's not allowed to forget, him and Roy were finally getting along XD
You do like to leave us hanging and wanting more don't you?! ;)
Looking forward to the next chapter.

And I will keep an eye out for Cost of a secret next month. XD

I just started reading this story and I already love it! Please update soon! I really want to now what happens next.

It is a rare thing for me, but I sat down and read all 18 chapters to date, at once. After having done so, it is my great pleasure to congratulate you on a truly great piece of fanfiction. The story is intricate, engaging, heart-warming and tense. Very few grammatical errors were evident, which I'm sure you know is unusual in the genre. My favorite part about all of this is how wonderfully you've fit the characters to the situations in which they find themselves. Even though Roy seems to change very suddenly in the first two chapters, you make it very clear that the shock dulls a bit and he begins behaving more like himself, but a sort of softer and more vulnerable (or fuzzy and huggable, whichever you prefer) version of the Roy Mustang we love to hate. In short, hats off to you. Bookmarked, favorite, ten stars and a smiley face. Excellent work

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yay! I love this story, it took me a second to recognise the title but when it hit I couldn't get to the update fast enough.
I can't wait to see what Anton and Wrath have planned for Ed.
Looking forward to the next update.
(Does this mean that Cost of a Secret is being updated too??)

this is good, i hope you update soon!