rate_review Reviews

You know I kind of feel sorry for Anton...he was as trapped as a lot of others were in the reign of Dante and her creations. I do feel for him and hope there is a way out for him but he (like Envy) needs to let his jealousy and anger toward our boys and FMA crew go. Nice to see Wrath trying to do some good in this world. I feel for him too. And those poor boys down in the old city..there were just being boys...glad Wrath stepped in and helped. Glad that Ed and Roy are slowly making their way forward with each other. Nice to see Riza and Al finally admitting their feelings but willing to see what happens. Riza is right. They need to see what the future holds. There is a little mystery there. Al may have more in common with Winry...but who knows...have no clue who Winry or Riza would be paired with. And Havoc is finally luck in love...I hope. Olivier for Fuhrer (spelling?). Breda...about time a story has him taking a central role...he is underused as the other characters in Mustang's army...they are all such good guys and gals (not forgetting Deny, Ross, etc). Glad for the update but I know how real life interveres with the things we really want to do. And sorry for the typos etc that I did not correct. Glad that Ed is getting better and Izumi and Sig might a side appearance! Yeah!

oh dear old sins are coming home to roost it seems... great update looking foreward to more sorry it's so brief just got back from out of state (and dial up hell) and i'm trying to catch up on 3 weeks worth of work as well as type up all the hand written notes for my stories

affie (and rysh sort of )

Chapter 16. I just keep feeling more and more sorry for Anton. I am glad that I was never in his position. Hoho is right....good thing Mustang found the boys instead of Dante. Too bad the FMA gang does not realize how much Anton helped them...his survival was involved in that too but he was smart enough to know what needed to be done and participate in it also. Too bad he did not want to testify on behalf of Ed and Roy...he could have been forgiven...maybe. He did not mean for Selim to get killed. No one did. Mustang and Riza did not see that one coming. Oliver as Fuhrer...cool. Glad Ed is starting to regain himself and good that he and Roy are finding each other. Peace between Pinako and Roy...good. A possible understanding between Riza and Al....??? Glad Breda gets a good role in this story...I think we take him for granted too much. I like to see him included more and in this story he gets to show off his brilliant mind. Someone for Jean...who is immune to Roy's charm. The story is progressing nicely.

I finally caught up with the last 3-4 chapters. (I am suppose to be packing and moving!) I think your story is progressing nicely. I actually feel sorry for Anton...he created Gluttony...how sad. He really got the bad end of many deals. So did so many others. He really should not be trying to destroy Ed and Roy. But he would have animosity (spelling?) towards Ed because Ed's path diverged so much from Anton's even though they had done the same thing. Anton did not have a Mustang in his life. I like how all the characters are progessing. At least Ed is starting to understand where Al is coming from but there has been so much damage. Poor Roy...he really wanted to be the one for Ed. Roy himself had been sexually abused. I like how you interwine the flashbacks. Is Gluttony paying a visit to his brother?

I like the way you've explained Gluttony, the anime tells us about how all the others came to be more or less but never explains gluttony.
I don't know how you manage to concentrate on 2 stories at once but I'm glad you do. This chapter explained a few things for me but I still have lots more questions. Please update soon and answer them for me. XD

Every time I read this story Im just amazed by how much the plot thickens and continues to twist! thank you for the update!

“The ‘evidence’?” Wrath repeated. “That’s cold. Your own brother…” - what about his brother??? I'm really intrigued by this. I've come to realise that you like the cliffhanger endings to chapters, this is not good for my blood pressure.
Please take pity on my health and update soon :D

I love this story!! loved the chapter and can't wait for the update!

Truly amazing, the way that Ed is starting to accept Roy. I will admit though that King Bradley is by far the most evil character in this story. Just reading the first couple of chapters I almost couldn't stand it.

Ahhh...excellent chapter. Alots happening really quickly! Please update soon!