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SWEET! Olivier! I fucking lover her! And I always thought out of Mustang's Group Havoc would be her type!

Wow.....wow....just wow. alot happened in this chapter. Ok....woo. Please update soon!

O_O! So Roy WAS talking about himself a few chapters back when he mentioned the double standard involved in rape cases! Ed: "But it's rape". Roy: "So few see it that way". *wibbles* I thought it odd at the time that Roy would mention a young boy being pressured into having sex by an older woman when that clearly had nothing to do with Ed's situation but it makes sense now. This is why he's able to reach Ed and understand him when the others can't. This is what Ed is picking up on that makes him feel like he can trust in and rely on Roy. They're both survivors. wow. Poor Roy. Just one more thing for him to have nightmares about. *snuggles Roy* I'm guessing that the clothes Roy threw in that lake were the ones he was wearing when his rape occurred. They were/are like Ed's hair, something that had to go. ;_;

O_o? WTF is Olivier's deal? scary. I'm afraid for Havoc! :) I bet he's never "dated" a girl like this one before! LOL!! Ok, check this out! When I first saw her name I immediately thought of the cover of volume 17 of the manga so now that is how I picture your Olivier. I haven't read that far ahead in the manga but are they one and the same? If so, it's nice to have a visual reference for this character! If not, oops, oh well! :) Also, Olivier makes me think of Sir Laurence Olivier so I'm pronouncing her name like his. [Could this review get any more random?? jeez.]

*giggles* Al's kissing Riza!! :) I am suddenly reminded of skydark's story (which totally rocked btw!! w00t! :D sorry. another random moment there.). Riza is a much better match for Al than Winry is any day of the week if you ask me. I like 'em together. Don't know if you intend to do anything with them but I think they're cute together! No where near as good as RoyEd mind you but still cute! :) It's so sweet how close Roy and Ed are! You have me wondering just how much closer they will become! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

I Crave It. I Want It. I Love It. I NEED It!!!

Please, (PRETTY PLEASE!)
HURRY and update SOON!

I'm DYING for more!...More!!...MORE!!!

O.O WHAT A BITCH!!! that bastard!!!! Roy figures something out right? RIGHT?! hope so... WAITING TO READ MORE!!

*Stares at screen with big eyes*

OH! I've been PWN'D by plot!

Awsome!

OK so chapter nice was a fun read. The only think I can say is you need longer chapters, and more of them :) Too much suspense! Poor little Ed have gotta get back on his feet.

Just read chapters 8 and 9. Your story just keeps getting better and more interesting. Of course I always love all your work. Poor Ed and Roy and the whole FMA gang. I cannot wait until the truth about Anton comes out. You know Ed will remember and piece it all together and then Breda will nail him. Side note: Pinako running around out of her mind clad only in a bra and panties...this imagery does not leave the mind quickly. I like how you added dialogue between Roy and Riza from the end of the anime into this story before Roy does his striptease. Gives a whole new dimension and twist to what he really meant in the anime. Is Fuery going to end up with Havor, Riza with Al, and Ed with Roy? This is so much fun. The angst is not fun but it is interesting and thought provoking. Thanks for updating.

Oh no! that bastard! how will Ed get through this one!?

This is a fun read :) Let Roy cuddle Ed a little will you! He needs it.