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Oh, how I love new challenges, and you have your dare in writing this challenging fic.
Politics are non-easy issues to plot, all those conspirations and stuff around are simply exciting.
And, I like the fact more people are involved in this, that is Al and Riza, I mean, all other fics I read refering Bradley's death topic only take Roy as a suspect and don't go further. I look forward to reading your ideas.
Are you finally putting Ed and Roy together in the same place under house arrest? uhm... well, I don't know, but before give my opinion let's read your thoughts first.
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everybody always underestimates Ed...he is really stronger than he looks! *thumbs up* Way to get em Ed! Nice chapter...it shows everyone's views on the whole incident and the way they feel now. Update soon!

Chapter 5/I think you are doing a fine job of showing the time and hard work it takes to try and recuperate from mental and physical damage. Poor Ed and Roy and all the rest of those that care for them. Poor Al...sometimes he feels left out of Ed and Winry's life. At least Ed is starting to make decisions on his own. It is a start. Poor Roy. He is still haunted. Roy saves Ed from torture and he is still being investigated as a war criminal. What is up with that?! No wonder he is angry and still haunted by nightmares. Hope Ed can help him with the nightmares and everything else. If Ed and Roy end up together will Winry and Al turn towards each other? Will Winry decide that she actually loves Al not Ed? Well the last two feel like soap opera questions and will or will not be answered in the future of this story. Please continue. Would like to see where you go with this. Good work. (Still can't believe that Envy acknowledges that Ed is his brother and is unable to stay and watch Ed's brutalization but yet does absolutely nothing to stop it. Had to get that off my chest.)

omg I can't believe I was out of this world for so long! so many chapters written and I wasn't here to read!!!
but now I'm back.

My eyes were like plates when I read about Al's added age, you have to have your reasons for that and the fact Hohenheim is alive and Envy is at the Gate... I still don't understand it, but again, you must have your reasons.

Yawn... this is getting... kind of boring... are they staying there longer? okay I know you have no idea how it'd continue and this is not an adventure fic but I think they should take separate paths some time later.

I liked the part when Ed asked the nurses to cut his hair, his own decision after obeying and obeying and obeying before. And his self-destruction feelings made me nod from my chair, yes, he's a person in despair and doesn't think of what Mustang said about he's somebody who's worth it.
Uhm... many steps to make one after the other... sighs... good fic as always. Take care

MaryLover

*squeal* i... uh, i don't know... poor ed, he's so upset. well, he's not exactly upset anymore, he's just depressed. *sigh* and the alxwin angle that is starting to possibly surface always intrigues me. i can't stand edxwin, but i love alxwin, so... yeah, i don't know what'll happen there. anyway, i completely lost my train of thought. actually, i never had a train in mind, i'm just typing what i think to type. so... i'll stop now, i suppose. i hope to see more, so be sure to keep writing!!~

auugh! great chapter, just kinda short. poor ed... it's so sad. i cry now. *cries* stupid hoho-papa, upsetting ed. he shall be punished!! (no he won't; it's not his fault) anyway, great job, please update soon!!~

*gasp* You cut his hair off! Oh....nice chapter. Thanks for updating

roy is such a sweetie! And I laughed at alphonse beig an alchy! along with Riza! Poor Ed...he will probably never be the same....unless Roy talks about alchemy wth him 24/7...but then it wouldn't be as fun would it? ;)

Ah! Wonderful so far. While I'm not usually a fan of torture for its own sake, the setting it creates is perfect for hurt/comfort bonding. Will we get to see Mustang holding Ed's hand through an exam next???

very good i love it!!!! please update soon ^^!