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Ne, so short, but still good. *huggles Ed* It's okay, it'll get better now. *squeeze* >.<

That's all we get? You tease!

Hi dear, I told you I was following your next works from the very beginning and tada! here I am, I looked for this one on ff but didn't find it, so I leave you my review here till you begin on the other site.
I like it, a promising fic and a promising plot. Now I wonder why you like Hohenheim so much that have him here again, don't worry I kind of like him too. And it seems Ed's still trusting Mustang, I want to know how they'll both manage to have a life after what happened... mainly Ed.
And over all, what happened to the other homunculi, and the Gate, and... are you intending to show that part where Riza's taking care of Mustang? uhm... an 'eventually RoyEd in your summary could suggest so many possibility until they'll finally end together... sighs

The end of a nightmare? haha! let me laugh... your fic's title is not there for just one chapter... bye

Oh, poor Ed. The saddest thing was watching him chase Al away because he didn't dare believe that it was really Al. I liked the way you worked Mustang's battle with the Fuhrer into your alternate take on the story. A good start that left me wanting more!

Definitely a worthwhile story to read! Even though Ed torture makes me sad, I feels it's a great idea to use it as an intermediate for Roy to get close to Ed. Can't wait for the next installment!

oh my goodness. that was so... awful for poor ed, but amazing. i love your writing and hope to see more soon!~

OMG This is so good, I really cant wait for the next chapter. Please update A.S..A.P

I just know this story is going to be awesome! Please keep updating!

Ooh, this is so good! I can't wait for the next chapter; update soon!

Wow. You've just been dying to be vicious (sp?) to poor Ed haven't you? Well, damnit I'm hooked allready! Can't wait for more!