rate_review Reviews

So, talk about a late review. XD You've probably forgotten that you ever wrote this, but hey, a review's a review, right?

I LOVE THIS. And, frustratingly, I'm not entirely sure I can tell you why. Nedunque once informed me that if I didn't like smut written by you, I wouldn't like any smut. And now, a number of years later that I don't want to think about because then I'd be a very definite adult, I agree with him. But what makes this little thing so damn epic to read is how little detail you actually go into on the physical side of things. It's all about their uncertainty and their sudden NEED and, by the way, just like to say, those were some of the sexiest descriptions of arousal that I think I've ever read. And, just, ugh. *has no words* The bit with Kai sensing Ray's o0'' and KISSING HIS HAND OMG. (Sorry. Maaaay have regressed to 14 year-old self XD) just made it all the better.

Blatantly using this as inspiration for my latest KR makeout session. Just that utterly contained little bubble where they're not thinking, they're just -thrusting- but almost more importantly they're -thinking-. I'd forgotten how important the feelings are. Which soumds stupid, I know.

Anyway. Going to shut up now. If you're actually still reading, then hi, and thank you for writing this little thing, what, four years ago? that is simple and sweet and sexy all at once and extremely inspirational. OK ok really am shutting up now.

Never gets old. NEVER. ¢¾

Now this is something that has become REALLY interesting. What on earth sparked that argument? and how did it lead to this? and what can come of it? I'm really hoping you actually make something of this and continue. Great job!

Sweet ^o^
Dirty humping and tender love in the end.
Lovely <3