rate_review Reviews

Nice opening chaptor. It's a liitle bit irritating (for me atleast) that there's the whole scary story, *gasp*, other stuff, but it was pretty entertaining. It kind of reminds me of this comic on dA. Same events minus Hillary, Daichi, the scary stories and the actual ride. It's more or less just seeing them after the bus stalls (or something) then they all start freaking out and Kai walks off and Tyson fallows him. So, yeah, the chaptor was pretty entertaining.

Totally saw that coming. Always with the door swinging closed, the creepy self-starting fireplace, and the trick door thing with these ghost stories. Though, this one seems to be alot more entertaining. Another fun chaptor with people hiding feelings and stuff. Yeah... Wait, I hate that. Oh, well. On to chaptor three we go.

And yet anoter fun house trick. Mirrored situations of characters even though they've been separated. And I'm guessing it wasn't just a coincidence that the person who found Tyson just happened to be a woman. Ah, whatever. I half hoping for some fun house madness, half hoping for something interesting to begin or, atleast, something to do with the situation the others are in. 'S fine either way.

Oh, hey. This was a... fun chaptor. With all the psychological(?) crap and whatnot. And here we are at the end of it where sentimental shit is finally revealed. Usually I'd have stopped reading a story like this, but somehow you've seemed to keep me occupied. For that I praise you as at the moment I happen to be bored with the world. And now, continuing to chaptor... five? I think.

Ah, that was fun, that was really really fun. It's nice have the dead monologue at times. But, other then that, huzah for partially romantic scenes. I love how it not said, but it already has been, but either way it wouldn't really matter because... ugh, yeah, it's all just a fun time. So to make that make sense (if that sentence even made sense), I think it's great how they both already know they're kind of already together, but there's no need for all the sentimental fluff and crap because of the weird 'bond' type thing and Kai's secret insecurities. Yeah, sorry, I've been watching Whose Line clips on youtube for about six hours now and I'm currently incapably of uttering any intelligent words/sounds. Plus all the secret yaoi suspense is making me explode with fangirl happiness.

Yeah, so I'ma stop this now so this doesn't get anymore personal and long. Keep it up!

Cangrats on finishing. It was definitely a cute story. KaiTaka is my OTP :)

Thank you oh God of Tyka writing *bows before thee*
I love this story, and I really love the twist at the end. All the way through you assume that this is new for them and that neither knows the truth but when I read the bit where Tyson told Kai that he understood why Kai wanted it kept low key I almost squealed (it was late, I was tired!) You pulled off an xmas, mystery, tyka fic and I am awed. Again it's late and I'm tired :)

Yay! Wonderfully charming fic! <3

Ooooohh! This is getting interesting! That was a nice touch at the end of the chapter. I can't wait until the next chapter! *giggles* Please update soon. This story is getting REALLY, REALLY good!!

Lady Kirei ^_^

He what?... He fell unconscious and what?! How could it end there?! *dying on the spot* Tyson!!!!