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by Kali

person beautifullove348
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! How could you end it there! So exctiting! But, damn, the ghosts are jerks. Kai's cute though with his possessiveness :)

Please update soon!
person Baroqueangel
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting ever so patiently for this, thank you for updating. It was well worth the wait. I'll continue to wait patiently (sort of) for the next chapter. Please don't leave it as long as you did, last time I ended up reading all the chapters of once a thief in 2 days and then I was still waiting.
I love your stories, you are a master.
I may be slightly sleep deprived so forgive me if this review is confusing.
Update soon please.
Baroqueangel
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*__* Please, please, update soon! I loooove that story so much! >/////<
person Kiotana
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
JEBUS! Get me outta here!!! DX Spooky stuff!
person Baroqueangel
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't be bothered to sign in. I love this story, I feel really sorry for Tyson and Kai but also think they're a tad daft. I know Tyson wasn't likely to remember but Kai should have flagged the name! I can't wait to see what you do to them next :) More please.
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter ^____^ *is sooo happy!* Well done!
*sighs* But, why the heck do people in situations like this one tend to seperate??? X___X Oh, the stupidity hurts!
I'd never let someone leave me alone in such situations! >___<
I just hope, they get out the mess fine ó.ò But a great chpater, as always!! ^___^ Ohhh, the tension still got its tight grip on me! >___< *rubs her arms*
Please, please update soon! ^___^

BeyBye!
R-chan
aka Hoshisaki
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Look after Tyson. Make sure he doesn’t do something stupid." <-- That's my favorite! XD *lol*
Nice beginning! ^o^/ Can't wait for more! You're my TyKa-Goddess, FireKali! *___*
The spooky atmosphere is described sooo damn well, I actually got the shudders down my back while reading the second chapter! (From both spookyness _and_ TyKa moments XD) Well, Takao IS cute, freaking out XD
I really love ghost stories ^^ *waves banner* Especially those featuring ancient, abandomed houses!! *____*
Update fast please!!! Please, please, please! *__*

BeyBye!
R-chan
aka Hoshisaki
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, you write so well, I'm really jelouse-(Probably spelt wrong). I can't wait to see what chapter 3 brings, I love spooky stories.
person Kiotana
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-smacks review button a few times- OMG! They're stuck in the house now!!! NEXT CHAPTER!!! DX -smacks some more-
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, you almost feel the cold when you're reading it. Next chapter please.

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