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September 5, 2023 at 12:00 AM
I love the elements that I've seen here. However I've noticed it has been over a decade since you've posted this. I'm hoping you're well and wondering if you would ever come back to this and if not would you consider allowing someone to continue this lovely fic of yours? It would at least be nice to know if you're around the fandom still.
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January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, continue this fic! I am dying to find out what happens in the next chapter! Poor Goku. Is there gonna be any romance going on between Vegeta and him or is this just a slavery thing? I really hope you don't give up on this fic. Nice job with the write-age! :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why oh GOD Why?
Why haven't you updated? I want another chapter....please? ^_^
Why haven't you updated? I want another chapter....please? ^_^
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Good start. Very suspenseful chapter end. I can't wait for more.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very interesting
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
luv it already u've got to update w/the quickness.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad that you edited it, much easier to read now and more filled out. Hope for more soon.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so far! is goku going to remain a human or is he going to be revealed as a saiyan? please write and update soon!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Good job. You might want to break up your paragraphs a little more though. It will make reading it a whole lot easier.(just saying)