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for My Slave

by Aiyori

person Zofo
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Sci-fi catastrophy start, though difficult to read as one long paragraph. Prehaps splitting it up would be better (just a suggestion).

Is Goku really human? I'm kinda hoping he has a tail-tale scar.

Vegeta seems really cruel and un-feeling, I hope Goku can soften him.

Please continue as this is very interesting.
xxx
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**bites lip**this is starting great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
J-chan

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