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for Duo Maxwell,Gun for hire

by countd

schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good fic, when are you going to update?

one thing, you have a minor problem with your feline genetics. only white cats with blue eyes are at risk for deafness. (i know this from experiance, because we had two cats with blue eyes, and the vet only worried about the white one.)
person nightchild
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think i missed something between chapter 7 and 8. how did Heero loose his hearing and get cat eyes also what did Duo do and what was burned down? is there a chapter missing?
other than that it is a great story. I haven't read the vampire books but I mostly get the differences and the little things that make them interesting. keep up the good writing!
person nightchild
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank for the libraries and fire don't mix chapter. it must not have loaded when I read it early this morning. I was really confused @.@!

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