rate_review Reviews

YAY! They are alive *smile*

You did a pretty good job with the ending. And the mention and the end with a purple haired man was for sure the way to a sequel ^^

But I don´t think you should write an epiloge. For me, an epiloge is an ending without the chance to make a sequel. And I´m looking forward to one :D

About a new name for your story...
I think I would choose "Tortured Soul". That way anyone can choose for himself / herself which soul was
tortured (Tyson with being kidnapped and Kai with going crazy without a hint for Tysons whereabouts)

see ya *winks*

Drake294

First of all...
This is really a good chapter ^^
The part where the group of Bladers run into the Doc and Daichi is my favorite :)

To answer your question...
Personally I love happy endings. But I don´t know how Tyson and Kai would come out of that. The chances that they would be found alive are really small.

But I´m a optimist ^^
I would be glad if they survive the breakdown of the roof - even if they were hardly injured - and you could write a sequel to this one ^^

yours
Drake294

Please write a happy happy ending!!!

Viva La KAI/TY

write a happy ending! (you're right! the optimism does kill me... *dead*)
ASOTA

*sigh* well you weren't kidding at the words 'cliffie'. My vote goes in the direction of a somewhat happy ending. Our poor bladers have been through enough drama me thinks.

You can't just stop it there!!!! Keep going going going...keep going going goin. This has been three teaser chapters so far where really no action has occured but I still can't help but love them because of all the thoughts/small action.

I hate to admit it but Boris is clever... (f*** security system)
But Kenny saves the day ^^
Is it me or seems he much older the way he acts?
Maybe it´s just the stress ^^°

Good chapter :)
See you in the next one *smiles*

yours
Drake294

Another teasing chapter, but that's okay. It was well written and I very much so enjoyed the bit between Daichi and Tyson about Tyson seeing him as a "younger brother" of the group.

poor daichi... he can't move and he's going to be put on that machine again soon... i hope the others find them, but don't get caug---what am i THINKING?!?!? i'm the most pessimisstic person in the world!!! don't tell me that i'm becoming OPTIMISTIC!!!!!!!! that's bad!! that's VERY bad!!! the balance of the world is going to tilt and crash because of this!!! ..........i have to go now.....
ASOTA

Not another teaser!!! Lol sorry. Anyway. Very good chapter. I really like the maturing that Tyson seems to be doing. Viewing himself as an older brother. Although before this situation, I believe that he would have been grouped with Max and Diachi. Update as soon as you can!!! I really enjoy reading this story.