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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I am glad that Ed is happy in this world. Feel a little sad for the original Roy...he lost Ed. How did original Roy do after seeing Ed alive again before Ed returned to this world? Do you think you would ever write a short story showing how well or unwell Roy lived his life post C. of Shamballa?
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff! And you say you're a bad writer. Poppycock! Heh... Cock. >.>
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really sweet. Even if Ed didn't end up with the Roy of his world. I liked how it summed up his life and poor Maes's obliviousness at his relationship with the Earth Roy. Now Ed's the one getting the "You need to get a wife" phone calls, I'm sure.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. ^_^ I love it as much the second time around, Kai darling. You capture Ed's lonely, soft side so well. It makes me melt all over.