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for Pendulum Control

by MutantPoptart

person Zofo
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That encounter with the mini-space-bandits was funny, I wish they had boarded though just to see Vegeta swat them away :)

I love how the Goku/Kakarot switching is confusing Vegeta and that he is now the good guy however reluctantly.

Next stop a planet to get shields and weapons, somehow I don't think Goku/Kakarot will pay for them :)
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the Kakarrot/Goku duality, especially when Kakarrot comes through. And you do it so well--he seems so unstable, even when he's being regular Goku, it's kind of scary. His behavior has a sort of kid-playing-pretend thing, especially when he mentioned something about destroying civilizations like "the old days" and I'm still trying to figure out if he is indeed pretending or something happened that actually brought Kakarrot out. Vegeta is being ridiculously patient, though I suppose it's also for self-preservation since I wouldn't want to disagree with anyone THAT powerful. Very sad scene when he left his family btw. You are doing an awesome job ^___^ I look forward to more!
person EvaGreen
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please carry on. Its addictive.
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You need to update real soon, okay? c':
I'm really quite curious now, I need to know what happens next!

PS: Lol on Goku's awful timing.
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I remember this story. I was hooked before i am gald you updated. It has been a while so i read the previous chapterss. I love the story! it has a very interesting start, it conbined the humor and darkness. I wonder what's in Kaka's mind and what this leads to. please update soo.

btw, goku and vegeta on a luxury ship! why I felt they are on a honeynoon? Looking forward to your next chapter
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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This is pretty epic.
Update soon, please.
person Ulrike
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm excited to see this story continued. Goku/Kakarotto is really creepy, as well as annoying. I fear for Vegeta's safety, yet I'm very excited to see the possible future angst. Keep up the awesome work!
person Zofo
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is very interesting.

I didn't see Goku's transformation coming, wonder what set it off and if it's reversible, not even sure I want it reversed at this point as it's making Vegeta show more humanity than Goku.

Looking forward to their adventures in space.
xxx
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated. this story intrigued me. I can not wait to see where you take us to.
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Vegeta. I'm not exactly sure as to why Goku suddenly reverted to his Saiyan nature like that, but it makes for an interesting story. Your perspective of Vegeta is very detailed, and even though he still is sarcastic and caustic, it's interesting to see exactly how much he is changed and how different he is from what he was like when he first came to Earth. It's like the two of them have had a role reversal and Vegeta is more like Goku. It almost broke my heart when Vegeta said goodbye to Bulma and Trunks without actually saying goodbye. And when he thinks about how following after Kakarrot might lead to his death. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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