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OMG. I have been so into this story and I can't exzpress how wonderful a writer you are. I don't think I have ever reads a better fanfiction story. Please tell me you are not finished with it. The feeling you put into every character. I love you for this story. Please can you email me when you add chapters? I want to...no, NEED to know what will happen next. princesstracybrat1@yahoo.com.

Hooray! I'm so glad you updated, it almost didn't matter what happened in these chapters. Well, that's a lie. It still mattered. I'm so relieved that Trunks is in rehab, even if it did get that Amy Winehouse song stuck in my head for days. *shakes my fist*

Now, Goten just needs to get his head together and open up to Trunks about what he's been going through. You can do it, Goten!

And Shinji needs to fall into a well. I thought I was warming up to him, but I was wrong. He's still really creepy.

Wow, I had all but lost hope on this story and now not one, but two LOVELY updates in the last few days :D Thank you so much! This is one of the best-written dbz yaoi stories on the web. (I've also reviewed before as Tru6768 but I have to reiterate every time I review how good it is). It's just so easy to read.

THANK DENDE Trunks was in rehab! I was afraid, by the way everyone was acting, that something really, really weird or horrible had happened to him. Not that battling drug addiction isn't horrible, but I dunno...I just thought it'd be something worse. I'm so glad it's not! I loved the intense scenes between Goten and Gohan and then Goten and Trunks. I can't tell you how relieved I am that it went so well (all things considered) between Goten and Trunks. It's so nice to see them as friends again. I felt truly relieved (right along with Goten) when they made up, and joked around like they used to, and *sigh* when Trunks laughed and really meant it for the first time in who knows how long.

Now I can't wait to see what will happen with Shinji and how things will go when Truten breaches the subject of...well...Truten :-P

I'll be on the edge of my seat til then :)

Wonderful update! The intrapersonal communication is poignant and captivating.

I look forward to the next one whenever it arrives.

I really hope you eventually update this story.... I had to search for it, not remembering what the title was, but knowing it was one of my favorite Goten Trunks stories... At least it came up in a summery search with just their names. Took forever to comb through what did come up though.

I'm definitely going to have to bookmark this some other way though. I hate being on a shared PC, can't ever bookmark something without someone else in the family curious enough to see what it is that you have. *sighs in frustration.*

At any rate, I do hope that one day this story will be continued. It's so real, their emotions as characters, I don't think I've really read a Goten/Trunks story that was as developed in the same way as this one. I hope you find the inspriation to one day finish it, and until then, I'll be hoping for it.

~daisy

It is absolutely killing me waiting for an update to this story! I must know what happens to Goten and Trunks (and maybe also Shinji. I guess I'm warming up to him. haha)! Please update this story soon. XD

Hey :) I was just reading this chapter again and I have to say, you did a great job writing from Goten's p.o.v. I think that it's hard to write first person anyway. And since we know so little about Goten's adult character from the show, you have to do most of it from scratch. And I think you do an excellent job. The character you've created is deep, conflicted, believable, and I just love him :) Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it's coming soon!

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Hey I really love this story ^_^ Do you have an updates list? If you do could you please add me? My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com I don't want to miss any of it!

Hey... Sorry I didn't review for chapter ten.... I've been so caught up with university studies that I sometimes forget to take time off to enjoy myself and read for fun. I really liked how you've developed your OC, to the point where Goten is just getting over Trunks I guess.

Can't wait to see the next chapter.