rate_review Reviews

This is really good!

Although there was 2 separate times when I nearly stopped reading. I just thought Goten was too pathetic! But I stuck with it and I'm glad I did!

The angst is perfect!! And I now love this piece! It just took a while to grow on me! But that could be because this is the 1st serious Truten fic I've read.

Again, great fic! Update soon!!!

Wow...he threw away the BEST opportunity! I hope I'm never that stupid. Of course I understand his reasoning behind it, but still--Trunks was *right there*! Offering. And Goten decided he was joking. It just made me want to scream.
Anyway, I love this story. I like the plot, and I can actually relate to Goten's situation right now. It was actually kind of eerie reading about how he hated his job, and his life and had no idea where things were going, since I've felt that way myself quite often recently. And I like how you're putting some real thought into the story and not just making one huge, smoldering sex scene. Those get tiring after a while because that's not what real life, and real love, is like.
Please continue this soon. You're doing a great job with it and I can't wait to see what you have cooked up for the next chapter.
Goten and Trunks forever! ^_^

Oh my god. This is one of the best Truten stories I've ever read. It's soooo angsty and drawn out and hitting all the right spots. Poor Trunks and Goten. Then so obviously love each other. Need each other. Want each other. That last part where they almost kissed nearly KILLED me. Wow. You're a masterful storyteller.

Woah! I loved this chapter so very much, please please please update soon! (I'm looking forward to that movie xD) I wish I could slap Goten ¬¬ but oh well, once I've been in the same situation as him and did the same stupid thing.

Ooh. Close. Trunks is more observant than Goten is giving him credit for. I think the more Goten straightens out his life the more he will discover about himself. I look forward to the next chapter. Great Job.

Gohan just got my respect. He's always so silly in other fics (not all of them) that I hardly think about him as a person who can actually have smart moves. I hope Goten's life gets better and he fix things up with Trunks (I hate hardships =_= well duh, who doesn't? xD)

I meant to review when I first read it, but I'm lazy and I need not to be because you guys need feedback! I'm not a writer (tried and failed hard), so I can't give you anything helpful, but I can tell you that I really enjoy the flow of the story and how you portray Goten. And with the last update, I love how Gohan came and saved the day!

Keep it going!

Hello, excellent second chapter! I like the way they behaviour, and that's the beauty of DBZ, there's hardly any room for OOC, it feels like the characters can do anything. They're both very real, it's very nice. And you're right about not jumping into romance from the beginning, that way we get to know more about their feelings.

(And just for the records I prefer you over Trunks anytime, Goten luv) Every time I read about a sad Goten I feel like Mary Suelizing myself and go help him in his misery, but luckily for the world those thought only stay in my head.

Well, keep 'em coming!

Great beginning. I like how you portray the thoughts, feelings, and actions of Goten. Keep up the great work.

First I have to say you made my day when I clicked aff.net and found a new Goten x Trunks. And it was Goten's p.o.v. which makes it better since I love him.

The story is going really nice, I seriously hope you'll write more instead of dropping it after one or two chapters like I've seen it happen.