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I am still loving this story. I can't wait to see what Roy and Ed do to Karen because I really want them to torture her just a little.

And when will Roy get his head out of his ass and be a man?? Just apologise and ask him to come back already, he wants to!!

Oh and I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, I tend to find the updates right before I need to sleep and forget to review later ^^;

I look forward to the next chapter XD

Well, Miko was right! This is such a great story. I simply cannot wait to see how things unfold between Roy and Ed now that all of this has passed... But after reading that last chapter I was thinking about possible ways the story could end... and i realized that you could totally crush all of our hearts, if you were that evil lol.

The most horrific ending I can think of would be that Karen would somehow go on a rampage and capture Ed, and then something would happen and he would die all alone and forced into submittance due to threats on a certain someone's life in some situation where Ed would see no other way out except to sacrifice his own life (perhaps buying time for a military unit to locate and take down Karen for good... poor Ed...). And then Roy would never ever get to tell Ed how much he still cared for him and that he was sorry and everything. And then Roy would be more depressed and upset than ever, possibly wishing that he could just follow his love into death, but being forced to live on for Liam's sake, always regretting his actions towards Ed and longing to see him again....... Gah, I depress myself... Why oh why must I have such a cynical mind??? T__T ....... PLEASE DON'T LET THE STORY END LIKE THAT!!!

yaaaaay for new chapters!!! boo for bad internet service... That last chapter was great! i'm glad that i FINALLY got to read it! *kicks computer many many many times* ... ancient desktop computers and dial up just don't mix....

Yaaay! Everything is coming together so nicely :) The fact that Roy has the whole karma thing in his head makes a lot of sense, but I hope he can get over it! I really want Ed and Roy to work things out and get back together, but it's gonna take a lot of work on Roy's part to make it happen I think. He had not given near as much to their relationship as Ed had, and if he keeps that up I see a big problem :( I feel bad for Roy, but at the same time I hope this serves as somewhat of an eye opener for him. Repent and ye shall be saved!!!! lol.

As for Ed, he must be in sooo much pain! Goodness, that was terrible for him. The comment about his automail always straining his body makes me very sad too. I hate that :( But I guess that really can't be helped. I just want to hug him :3 And it would be so cute if Ed could spend more time with Liam! That isn't likely to happen unless he and Roy make up or unless he has some sort of excuse like the day Liam was bored and stuck in the office, but still it would be cute. In any case, I'll be looking forward to what happens next! :D

Oh yeah, I've been meaning to ask something. Do you just make the story up as you go along, or do you already have it outlined in your head?? Like do you already know how you want to end it and such? I think this story is incredibly well planned out, even if it happens to be written with no clearly defined outline, and also greatly detailed in relation to the characters personalities and relationships. You're doing a wonderful job! I've enjoyed this fic more than any other that I've read on this site before, and I've come across what I though were some darn good stories in the past so that's saying something lol.

I really liked this new chapter. The info about Roy's past with Melissa was a nice touch. The explanation about his fixation on Karma also provides a good insight into why he acts the way he does. I feel bad for Roy, but at the same time I think he needs a reality check! lol. I hope he and Ed can work things out in the end, and I also hope Roy can learn to accept that good things CAN happen to him and that the world won't burst into flames because of it :) Roy really got a wake up call there at the end though. Maybe the fact that all of his assumptions were wrong (and the knowledge that he hurt people with them) will keep him from being so quick to judge later on.

The part where they're all sitting at the table was funny. Men are such babies sometimes! lol. The little exchange between Liam and Ed was adorable too. It would be cute to see Ed spending more time with him.

Oooohhh very nice story. i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the rest of it. so far i find the relationships to be very believable, which is rare among fics of the RoyXEd pairing. generally it's all smut and no plot. and somehow the two just magically fall in love in a matter of minutes, regardless of having no prior interest in one another and/or other men. i'm very interested in your approach with this fic, and i'll definitely suggest it to other RoyXEd fans like myself =)

Awwwwww, Miko i bet you're right! Gah, now i feel bad T___T I'm sorry i ever doubted you, Edward!!! *hug*

... I'm confuuuuuused!!!... I thought that Ed would be taking a more active role in the whole circle transferance thing, not just moving them to other people. Though I guess I'm just used to the self-sacraficing, 'take the world on his own shoulders' Ed lol... hmmm... idk, guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens next. As always, I'll be anxiously anticipating the next chapter!

Ahh, but perhaps Ed is not being passively active about this at all. I was reading the reviews above and it brought some interesting questions to my mind. After re-reading that last chapter I think I picked up on a few things that I missed before (how I missed it I have no idea though, lol). At first I thought Roy's description of how pale and sick looking Ed was, was because of the horror of what he had just seen his brother experience, or something of that nature. But combine that with the fact that his voice was raspy (an indication of raw vocal cords from screaming) and his certainty that Roy would scream "despite a high tolerance of pain" (helloooo! Automail surgery! Ed went through that as a kid and it was said to make grown men cry!), I now believe that Ed did, in fact, take part of the circle from cat Ed. Guess i'll find out if my observations are correct later. I can't wait for the next chapter!