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Yay! My internet has been down for so long now that i missed the last few chapters. I was super happy to see more chapters to read once i got it back though!!! That last one was pretty great, but i'm a little confused as to what Ed's intentions are. I mean, when i thought he was up to something i assumed he was going to take the circle himself... Now that that theory is out the window i don't know what to think! In any case, i'm really enjoying this story! Normally the plot of the fanfics i read are predictable but this one never does go the way i expect, which makes it all the more fun to read :) Keep up the super amazingly great work!!! I look forward to seeing what happens next!

Ah, this is so good! You're an amazing author, why do I ever put off anything written by the ones I know I love? *huggles Liam* He's such a sweetie, and I hate kids! With a passion. But I'm loving Roy's! Karen needs to be castrated repeatedly.

...What do you mean, you need multiple penises for that? Grr....Methinks it's time for a transmutical sex change, in that case, THEN we can have our castrations!

Aww, how cute. I love how this story is progressing! I feel bad for poor Ed. Roy too, of course, but for now mainly Ed because of that last chapter. It's so cute how he unconsciously moved closer to Roy and his son, wanting to feel like he was a part of the family, however small it may be. :3 Squeeee, love it!!! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! And the one after that... and the one after that... and... all of them!!!! ^____^ Thank you for writing such a magnificent story!!!! Your skills as an author surpass anything I've read on this site thus far.

Uggghhhh.... why did it have to end there!!! Gah! Great chapter, but you are totally evil when it comes to the endings T_T Can't wait for the next one!

Watch the new episoes of the brand new FMA anime series, Fullmetal Alchemist: Brootherhood ---> http://www4.funimation.com/video/?page=video&v=1832 yaaaaaayyyy! the style is really different and it kinda bothered me at first, but i think i'm really going to like it much better than the first, assuming it really is going to follow the manga lol. in any case, check it out!!!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......... how cute :3 i loved this chapter. keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!! ^_^

I like this last chapter. Liam needing both Roy and Ed and of course his cat Ed. Roy using Ed as a pillow and both of them sleeping on the floor...cannot laugh...I have fallen asleep on the floor before while studying, working, etc...The old feelings still lingering. How much a child can change your thoughts and how you feel. I knew that Karen was ready to do her brand of alchemy and that those circles were complete enough for it. I do not think I will stop worrying until those circles are off Liam and cat Ed. I know Karen is out there somewhere...she has been way too quiet and no on has seen her. Something bad is on the horizon. Too bad Roy did not see her for what she was but she probably was still sane then...people change and not always for the better. Sometimes there are parts of people we never get to see and I bet that is probably what happened here. Cannot wait to see what happens. Thanks for updating. cat

great chapter :) ... but oh what a terrible place to end it. lol. i really want to find out what Ed is up to. i think it would be cool if he just transferred it completely to himself. that sounds like a very "Ed" thing to do. sacraficing his own well-being for the safety of someone he loves.

that's a godawful evil place to stop it...but very good, best fma work i've read in a long while.

Another good chapter! This is such a good story, and I've not been very consistent about reviewing, but I am certainly enjoying it. You always do such a good job with Ed, Al and Roy, and Liam is a great addition to the mix. I like what you're doing with the alchemy, too—very interesting. Is Ed thinking that he'll transfer some of Liam's tattoo to himself, in spite of what Roy thinks? I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :)