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PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm begging you! I really really really really really REALLY want to know what's going to happen next ;_;

I absolutely adore this story. It has a lot of substance to it. Very unlike the random smut I often get stuck reading, lol. It only makes me sad that I have to wait to hear the end :( Keep up the excellent work!!! I look forward to the next chapter, and hope for many more to come.

Sorry I did not get to review earlier. Thanks for updating. Good chapter. Ed is so sweet even when he is hurt. I love how he interacts with Liam. The inclusion of the kitty from before their duel was a nice touch. Al and Ed working their differences out makes me happy...Ed and Al separated is a sad thing. I hope Al understands that Ed is just trying to protect him...I agree with Ed..Al has no place in the military. I think Roy does deserve to feel some jealousy and unhappiness regarding Ed. Roy has put Ed and others through a lot and getting a little back is good for him. He can get an idea of how it feels to be on the receiving end but more important it may help him see what he really needs to keep in his life: Ed. Roy is a good man to take care of his son. Before Liam would not have been safe but now he understands that the mother is more unstable and unsafe for her son and stepped up. He is doing what he needs for his son but I worry that Karin will be coming back for more terror. I do not think we have heard the end of her. She is probably plotting her revenge...bet Ed will have something to say about that. Havoc is a good friend...I do not think he was trying to make Roy jealous or putting the moves on Ed...I think he was being a stand up guy. Nice to see that the FMA gang still cares for and takes care Ed. Please continue.

I fogot to put down my name as radcat or radcat 38 so I used my nickname Cat. Still a big fan of your story and cannot wait for more.

Yay, I did a double take when I saw it then I was like 'It's backkkkkk' XD

Love the new update, it made me smile when Ed stopped to talk to Liam and I really felt for him after he'd talked to Roy. He must be so confused, Roy's such a bloody idiot, when he told Havoc to look after him I just wanted to slap him and tell him to get down on his hands and knees and grovel back to Ed.

Looking forward to the next update ^_^

interesting fic, hope to see more.

I like how your story is progressing. Glad Ed and Al are getting back to their brotherly relationship and that Roy and Liam are getting closer. I hope Liam gets to stay with Roy. If Roy had just trusted Ed Ed would have been there for him. I reread the last chapter (8) and at the end of the chapter Roy had hoped Ed would be there to support him. Well, if you do not trust and support the other person you are not going to get it back. All Roy had to do was be honest with Ed and say that he was going to get his son...Ed might have been angry for not knowing the truth but he would have been there. Glad that Ed has the support of all his friends and nice to see Hawkeye with a life! Cannot wait to see where the next chapters take us. You are building suspension and apprehension for the entrance of Karen and possibly Roy's enemies. Hope the judge can see the truth....but we have not seen Karen yet...makes you wonder. Love Ed the cat. Funny that Ed the cat thinks Roy is a bastard too the same way the old Fullmetal Ed used to. Keep up the good work.

Another great story!! Really hooked like I was with the others you've written. Can't wait to find out more. Write more soon.

loved the chapter! hope to see more soon!

I just can't find it in myself to feel sorry for Roy right now. He kinda deserves it for not trusting Ed. Please update again soon.