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I LOVE this story! I can't wait to read more! The relationship is so believable and I feel so much for poor Ed.

Lovin' this story! Don't stop writing! ^,^

*picks up a baseball bat and proceeds to beat James to a pulp* Poor little delicate precious couldn't take being with a military man huh? Automail too cold and hard for you, princess? feh. Ed's better off without this dillweed anyway. And what's this crap about Ed's nightmares disturbing his sleep? What a total cop-out! That's the sorriest excuse I ever heard!! Obviously "Jimmy" just wanted out of this relationship and wasn't man enough to say so. The sorry bastard had better not have been cheating on my Ed or my Baseball Bat of Doom will be the least of his worries! XD (whoa. I think I'm channeling Raine here! LOL)

Laim? Karen? Why you rotten little OCs! :) *grabs them by their shirt collars* Tell me who you are and what's your connection to Roy! *glares* Don't make me get out the Baseball Bat of Doom! :D Seriously tho, I am dying to know what their deal is. one of Tucker's transmutation circles? uh oh. not good. :[ Roy is driving me insane (short trip I know!) being all secretive! GAH! I can't figure out for the life of me why somebody, Jean or somebody, hasn't at least dropped a few hints about what it is that Roy is doing! I mean, since Roy never actually told anybody but Riza and Maes, he can't have sworn anybody else to secrecy. So, why not say something? Hell, even a few words of encouragement and a little reassurance that it will all work out and that Roy will explain it all when he gets back would be better than this silent treatment! Jean tried but he didn't do a very good job of it. GAH! Between this and whatever it is that Ed wrote or did to mess up his relationship with Al, I'm going crazy! Roy's not going to be the only one with an ulcer at this rate! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. When you mentioned the silicone automail covers, the first thing I thought of was that awful rubbery thing Ed wore in the movie. *sniffles* Way to make me cry nom! ;_; :P

Can't be bothered to sign in. I love this story, I thought I'd answered a few questions then I read chapter 4 and now I have even more!!! You're really good at mysteries!! Please update soon, I need answers :)

Another great chapter! I'm enjoying this story so far! Poor Ed, I can feel his pain. And crying in the shower is just awful! X(

kiki

As with your other fics, this is also a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work and update often! I think this story is actually depressing me a bit-I hate cheating. Never been a victim but a close friend of mine has several times and I can relate to the mental struggle I know Ed must be going through. Poor boy.

Oh, that is soooo sad. Poor Ed. He feels like his life with Roy is over at the same time he is remembering what he did to Al to keep him out of the military. No wonder he is crying. Love the angst. Wish Ed had a little more faith in Roy to try and trust him BUT it is pretty hard to keep trusting with too much secrecy and mystery going on and especially with their trackrecord. Too much has happened in both their lives for them to be fully normal but then again when has their lives ever been normal?! Roy needs to have some faith in Ed also. Ed really loves him. I have more than a few ideas regarding the people involved in the mystery. And my mind is going off in different directions. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Well done story. (Just sad when people think something is over before it even has begun.) We need to sit these 2 boys done and make them talk it out (like a good relationship!).

Waaaaa, Roy is so mean!!! And what is he hiding from Ed?
I mean, is it sooo terrrible that he can't tell Ed? I thought you know, they trust eachother
or something. Can't wait to find out what the secret is! Will Ed really leave Roy, and what
will Roy do then? will he forget and regret what he did to Ed or will he seek for forgivness??
so many questions.
Love where ur heading with this story! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!

Chapter 3...another good chapter. I loved the angst. You made me feel Ed's pain and Roy's. I am intrigued by the mystery. Everyone knows one way or the other except for Ed...he has not figured it out and Roy was protecting him from the knowledge before Ed joined the team. Interesting. Like how Havoc was trying to interecede as a good friend. That was sweet. He did it in such a guy way...trying to help but not sure how to do it. Poor guys. Roy seems haunted by the secret but sometimes trying to protect those we love have a way of backfiring. Please update soon. I love the ultimatium at the end. Did Roy follow...hmmmm...Wonder who it is and why Roy is going to "kill" her. I have many ideas but they probably are all wrong.hahhaha Al...where are you?

Uh oh... now I'm not as sure I know what Roy is hiding. Gah! The suspense is killing me now!