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Oh no, I think I know what Roy's secret is. :( Poor Ed, even if I'm wrong it sucks to be kept out of the loop. I hope he and Roy can sort this out. Please continue soon!

I'm so hooked, I love your writing I can't wait to find out what the secret is. I'm also hooked on Nighmares so...
My favourate line - “Brother? Is Captain Hawkeye holding a gun to your head?” I couldn't help but laugh, it's just so true! More of both please. Pretty please?!

Another good chapter. I have soooo many questions regarding the big secret. My mind is going in soooo many directions at the moment. I have sooo many guesses. Can't wait for the secrets to come out...except I feel for Ed and Roy when they do. Can't wait for the backstory on Ed and Al. THAT appears interesting as well. I love the fact that Ed is a bastard Lt. Colonel himself now. That was funny. Riza is sweet and protective of Ed and that is nice to see. You are right: there are more than just secrets that can cause the downfall to a relationship...Ed and Roy need to work on theirs. Not a good sign when one goes into a relationship knowing that it will fail in the end. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating.

Wow! Very interesting! A riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma! :D I have no idea what Roy's gotten himself involved in but it sounds bad. You'd think that by now Roy would know that secrets are a bad thing esp where Ed is concerned. *sigh* The man will never learn. Whatever it is, I am more than a little mad at him for hurting Ed like this. It's bad enough that the poor boy thinks there's some cheating going on but to not have Al to go to makes it even worse. I have so many questions! :) What is Roy's secret? Why would it break up him and Ed? Where is Roy going and what's he going to do when he gets there? Why is there a distance between Ed and Al? What put it there? What is this about Al's permanent record not changing? What's wrong with it? Why would it change? Why does Ed have an odd opinion about Al being an alchemist? Al's always been an alchemist so what's changed? What did Al do? Who are all these OCs? etc etc etc. :) Gah! I can't decide which one of these I want to know the most! Curiosity is killing this kitty! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Okay, now you have me hooked on the mystery. I need more chapters as soon as you can post them....no pressure...no hurry...I was thinking at the beginning that Roy had another family but now I have some ideas about this research and its ties to Ed...not good ones. And Ed and Al...hmmm...some problems there...does it have to do with Ed being gay or something else? Can't wait.