rate_review Reviews

Very amusing and somewhat strange...I laughed when both Goku and Vegeta are rescued by NamekBoy, Great Saiyaman, and the Twin Terrors. The thought of Piccolo dressed like Saiyaman....funny stuff. And the end was very steamy. Seems like everybody, except for Bulma, Chichi, Mirai, and Videl got what they wanted.

Cute fic! I had to re-read the Chichi/Bulma part a couple times, though, since I didn't realize they had followed Goku and Vegeta at first.

*currently suffering from temporary brain freeze*

ah, i remember this from Fanfiction.net you're very silly =D
You're obviously a good writer who knows how to write funny, weird stuff along with dramatic, sexy stuff =P kudos to you for mixing the two =)

this so funny. I crackled a lot even I have read this before. the monkey sex was really hot.

Funny story. I can just picture Goku chasing Vegeta round the island, and the parts with Saiyaman and the Terror Twins also made me giggle.

I'm glad Goku realised they should have been together a long time ago in the end as well.

Your writing is very humorous, but can you write Vegeta a little less uke and soppy? Is it possible for you to fit your humor in that? I hope you are up to the challenge!
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this is awesome!!!

what girl doesnt like sayian man on man action?? this makes all the weird looks u get seem great!! and quite justified. too bads its a one shot. would love to know if they have a kid and what nots.. oo well..

still i laughed out loud one too many times and had the what the hell is she doing look from my husband.. lol!! soo more i say, from u both MORE!!

since u guys do so good w this mayhaps u should try for a serious fic..

ooo ... well its some food for thought.. u two work great together.. soo keep it up!