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by angelofinnocence

person Aestas
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. You have this way of making the characters completely isolated, but vulnerable as well. There's this magnificently grungy feeling that covers both characters, but you still have compassion for them and their chance at happiness, or as close as they can come to it. I am beginning to fall in love with your writing style, angst and all (and that's HUGE for me...I usually avoid angst like the plague!). Loved this, thanks for writing.

A
person merith
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know, i wasn't sure where you were going with this, and was half afraid i would come to hate the story before it was over, but... i don't. i really enjoyed reading it. i enjoyed its flow and cadence, and of course, how they found solace in each other. eventually finding love...and hopefully, happiness.

thank you for writing.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet. I liked it!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was well written, very dark and angsty. I like the way they found themselves in love in spite of themselves. Love takes many forms and manifests in ways we don't expect, and often happens even when you don't want it to. Great job.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this one shot you wrote.
Though I told you that when you read it to me before posting it.. but I decided to be your first commentor.
*steals comment virginity* :D
<3

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