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November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G, love it,
LOVE IT...MMMJJJ.. HOW WOULD HAVE THOUGHT THAT VEGETA COULD BE SO MATERNAL, in his on way of course, but still CUTE..
Anyway forgets about thinking of abandoning this story.. OK you MOST FINISH IT.
if you don't... I WILL GO CRAZY.. GRAB A KINIFE OR A GUN A HUNT YOU DOWN. AND WHEN I HAVE YOUR HEAD I AM GOIN TO HANG IT IN MY WALL. DID YOU GOT THAT. BETTER GOT IT, BECAUSE I MEANT EVERY SINGLE WORD..... now go on a start writing and posting chapter for the story. OHH AND I WILL HAUNTED YOU DOWN FOR REAL IF YOU DON'T FINISH THE STORY. I AM TALKING( actually writing) FOR REAL.
LOVE THE STORY.. CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE..
........... AND REMEMBER YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED...........
LOVE IT...MMMJJJ.. HOW WOULD HAVE THOUGHT THAT VEGETA COULD BE SO MATERNAL, in his on way of course, but still CUTE..
Anyway forgets about thinking of abandoning this story.. OK you MOST FINISH IT.
if you don't... I WILL GO CRAZY.. GRAB A KINIFE OR A GUN A HUNT YOU DOWN. AND WHEN I HAVE YOUR HEAD I AM GOIN TO HANG IT IN MY WALL. DID YOU GOT THAT. BETTER GOT IT, BECAUSE I MEANT EVERY SINGLE WORD..... now go on a start writing and posting chapter for the story. OHH AND I WILL HAUNTED YOU DOWN FOR REAL IF YOU DON'T FINISH THE STORY. I AM TALKING( actually writing) FOR REAL.
LOVE THE STORY.. CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE..
........... AND REMEMBER YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED...........
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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while but got a brand new computer now so should be able to keep up :)
Glad Gohan and Mirai are back together now and he knows about his son, hope he isn't too mad at Mirai. Videl should know now that she has no hope of getting Gohan back after that last sentence.
Goku and Vegeta have had a girl since I last reviewed, good for them and glad there were no complications this time :)
Glad Gohan and Mirai are back together now and he knows about his son, hope he isn't too mad at Mirai. Videl should know now that she has no hope of getting Gohan back after that last sentence.
Goku and Vegeta have had a girl since I last reviewed, good for them and glad there were no complications this time :)
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to your next update!! PLEASE post the next chapter soon.
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad he finally broke up with her and yes she did push him to it. Not that I'm sad as now he's free for Mirai :)
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohh he's back :) I don't think Videl stands a chance of stopping it now (at least I hope so). Liked the little talk Vegeta had with him at the end chastising him for being so foolish.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so Loving this chapter keep up the good work.
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mirai needs to come back and show Videl just WHO it is that Gohan loves. She's just as stubborn as her father and needs a major reality check. I love the story. I can't wait to read more!!
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe Snape a saiyan, that is awesome.
The story is great, I just want Mirai and Gohan
to be together! I am rooting for them!
The story is great, I just want Mirai and Gohan
to be together! I am rooting for them!