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Very nice update. I do kind of feel badly for Videl, being led on all this time when Gohan only really loved Mirai Trunks. Looking forward to finding out about the happenings of Mirai's and Gohan's vacation together and if Mirai can keep to his word about not wanting things to happen while on their trip. The ending with Vegeta was nice as well. Having a baby is certainly making him take more of an interest in his offspring.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

A pregnant Vegeta? Very interesting. Usually, in the stories I have read, when Vegeta is the pregnant one, he ends up so out of character, I can't read the story. So congratulations to you for making him grouchy, irritable, unhappy, and a train-a-holic. I know that he isn't going to be the focus of this story, but I just had to tell you. Mirai doesn't seem very happy about the possibility of him becoming a parent if he and Gohan have a relationship. And I'm curious about what Gohan has planned. His reaction wasn't quite what I had in mind, but surprises are good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Shaping up nicely. Trunks doesn't sound very thrilled about his ability to reproduce does he, one more reason not to be with Gohan. I'm looking forward to their meeting and also how Videl reacts.

Slightly confused with the timeline though. You said it was a side-story so is that Vegeta's first baby or are they back from the other fic and having another? Maybe the clues are in that one and I missed them.

I've been searching for that Harry Potter/DBZ story I read about a year ago but didn't know what it was called or who wrote it. It was you. Thank you for that masterpiece, I've re-read it in preparation for this one.

I don't usually read Trunks/Gohan fics, (prefer Vegeta/Goku) but having read about them in the above fic I'm intrigued as to their history and how their relationship turns out (or not). Maybe you could fit a little bit of V/G in there too.
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I like it so far. Please update it when you get the chance. I wonder what Trunks is going to think of Videl.