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person Kayla
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was the best story I've read in a longggg time..perfect! I just loved this story! Amazing!
person DragonBallZFan101
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it all!!! Are u gonna make a sequal to it?! Plz say u will!! ^_^ I really want to see what happens!!! ^______^ Thank u!!!!!
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't read high school theme, but this one is so lovely!! this is such a beautiful story, and sweet. I love the way the story evolve and I love the ending. this is one of the best story I have ever read . an sweet and enthusiastic kaka is just lovely. I am going to check all you other stories. please please write more!
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've really enjoyed this fic, though im sad to see it come to a end.
i hope to see lots more fics from you in the future!
well done!!

calico
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schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is such a sweet ending. i've really enjoyed this fic and the pub they go to 'The Phoenix' reminds me of a pub close to where i am at Uni called the Phoenix Club :D
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Dabura McDemon that was too cool! And I'm absolute sure he'll do a better job than that other one, what's her name? ^.^ and Turles, he really made the scouter, I'm proud of him, maybe this could lead to a continuation some day...?

I loved this story beginning to end (well, except the cat dying but the same thing happened on FMA and I still love it) and hope all your stories if you really post them here are as nice as this.
person Dragon7
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!! I look forward to your next update!!

person Anon
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story just keeps getting better and better, I love it ^.^ The chapter 'Treehouse was so... I don't know, kinda like a movie. And Turles... I knew he was the main character of this story hehehe. Well, he isn't but he's certainly my favorite.
person Broken
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love your story! The only thing... in chapter 11... that poor kitten! I wish you let it live, I am a cat person and have a black cat and also have had my black kitten get hit. I feel so bad for it, but I am sure you had reason to move your story along *nods* just sad that the kitten had to die ;o; sorry for crying over her, but I am a cat person through and through haha. I have to read all of your stories though. I love your style and your deep thought in your work, great job and hope you keep it up!! *hugs teh dead kitten*
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bulma, if you spoil things for them I'll shave your head ò.ó
and Goku's plans... hehehe although well intentioned he really should have thought more about it...

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