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person Dragon7
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please continue writing and post again soon.
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello ^.^ nice chapters... the thing with the icecream *¬* oh wow! 'wanna lick my icecream?' oh wow!
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More! xD Radditz downloading porn ¦D and oh... Turles' gay porn... I don't know... I mean, what about BBM magazine, right? Oh well, who knows.

And Goku's dreams are awesome \o/

And the ending of ch 15 *nosebleeds chronically* sooo good! You are cool, lady ^.^
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The whole ch 16... wow!
Then Goku and Turles with the staring contest xD so cool, and Radditz, oh so it was his girlfriend who made him sour like that... poor thing.
About the games, I love games, I always squeeze a few in my stories too, I guess everybody I know has a PlayStation, so everywhere there's people playing.
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers are good and bad... "I want to talk to you"... scary little six words, it can only mean one thing or another. I'll wait patiently for the 28 chapters, I'm loving this story (and I love Turles, this is probably the only time in my life where I'll love Turles)

Well, I certainly don't mind seeing your name on top of the list, especially if there are new chapters added xD
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi! love this fic!
and just wanted to let you know, i love coming on here and seeing this fic at the top of the page! its great knowing ive always got something to read on here!
ooh, evil cliffy, bad author!
update soon!
soneji
xx
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm very sad for the poor kitten but YEAHHH!! \o/ xD probably the first kiss is always the most expected thing on a fanfic, this one was sooo cool, I loved it! The cool thing is that I can see it happening right in front of me, you write it like it was a movie, it's so easy to imagine.

Love Goku and Turles, and I'll be waiting for the rest of this and your other stories ^.^
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg, please update again soon!
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I don't even know where to start... man, this story rules! I have no idea why I clicked on it, being Goku x Vegeta and me being more a Goten x Trunks kinda gal but I'm very glad I did.

The relationship between Goku and Turles is nice, the kissing part was zooo hot *nosebleed* now I wonder about the little brother's involvement with the Ginyu guys (great way of using them too, by the way), and it's nice that Goku's friends are Goku's friends. People often tend to ignore them.

Now Vegeta... OMG... Cell?? Is he bug shaped in the story too? I hope not xD well, his face is nice at least. Better him than Freeza. And I loved drunk Vegeta.

I wanna know what's bothering Radditz too. And see Turles developing the scouter.

Hmmm... there was more I wanted to say but I forgot -.- well, I just hope things work out fine for teacher and student. Oh yeah, what about other fics, do you have more? Are you gonna post them here? You're awesome (so is your name xD)

Nana
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yeah, I remembered something, this fic reminds me of The History Boys, I don't know if you've seen it, but Goku reminds me of Dakin, and his infatuation with the teacher.

Okay ^.^ update soon!

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