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person coinshi
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. T__T
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the sweetest things I've ever read. You are a genius when it comes to this pairing, awesome!!
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm trying to think of how best to describe how much I like your writing. I just keep picturing little snapshots and moments - snatches of stolen time. And Piccolo memorizing each piece, putting it away to pull it away when he needs it to get through until the next memory is made.
person mgpem
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My eyes bulged when I saw this! I don't know how to get the volume of my appreciation through loud enough, but let me tell you this: There's few Piccolos out there that can rival yours! A Big And Squeeing Thank You!
But back to this particular fic:The moments were so sweet and at the same time sligthly dark and depressing. A very "Piccolo" kind of take on life (when he's feeling not so down...otherwise it would be just dark and depressed...colored with sarcasm) ^__^; BTW, Is this some sort of 'side' story to The Oceans, or is this set in a totally different universe? I couldn't help wondering...
person Salza
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I'm not sure. ^^() I hadn't really thought of it as being a companion piece for Oceans, but it seems to fit, doesn't it? I guess, in the end, you can take it how you like it - either a one-shot or a tack-on.
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, very nice ^.^ I loved the descriptions and the emotions. You made it all flow so nicely. Excellent fic!

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