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October 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Love!
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December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey make a DBz and Tekken crossover with Goku and Vegeta and even Steve Fox And Hwoarang and Marshall Law and Paul Phoenix and Piccolo and Gohan fics please
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why do I have a bad feeling that there is going to be a Baby in the picture soon and I'm not talking about an infant.
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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, oh God!!! So... so many, many tears! Amazing! You're a-freaking-out-of-control-mazing. Do you know that? You need to know how amazing you are.
I just love everything, every sentence is immaculate. Please, don't hold back. Write forever, please.
I just love everything, every sentence is immaculate. Please, don't hold back. Write forever, please.
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January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. i really really really REALLY liked this chapter! great work! ^.^
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January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor poor Gohan and Piccolo D; I hope they have a baby together later on...
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the late review, I've not been around due to the death of my father :(
Loved the birth scenes, especially Goten and Gohan helping and Goku passing out. The epiloge made me laugh with Vegeta forcing Goku to change diapers and Roshi getting blasted in the face. The personalities of the cubs are wonderful and I hope to read more of them in the sequel :)
Loved the birth scenes, especially Goten and Gohan helping and Goku passing out. The epiloge made me laugh with Vegeta forcing Goku to change diapers and Roshi getting blasted in the face. The personalities of the cubs are wonderful and I hope to read more of them in the sequel :)
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I'm happy to feed your review monster. I absolutely love your series. Its how I always wished DB would end, these are indeed my favourite couples. I am so glad you wrote this and shared it.
In this chapter I happily wept for our lovers. I'm so very happy for them.
Thanks again for sharing.
Rylili
In this chapter I happily wept for our lovers. I'm so very happy for them.
Thanks again for sharing.
Rylili
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!! I just wanted to say I love ur stories! I love it!! I also am happy I found another person that likes Piccolo and Gohan. I looked EVERYWHERE, and they bearly have any. Y_Y So thanks! I love GokuxVegeta, they just seem so right togther. I cnt wait to see what happens in the next story. I wanted to knw, did u make a story before this. The one after Goku died with Cell. When Goku and Vegeta start becoming a couple? I was just wondering, bc I would love to read it. Keep up the good work!!! Thank you!!! ^_______________^
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was Good very sweet too. I really love the sweet familiy you portrayed them to be. I just hated Chichi and Bulma but I guess that was your intention... Anyways I'm interested if there would still be more I like to know what happeneds next and who's going to be the twins mates. E-mail me please if you're still going to continue! Thanks!!