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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! It was perfect down to every last detail. I can't wait for the sequel. I also would like to comment on how great your writing skills are and how you are very attuned to detail. I love the cubs' names and how Takeo got revenge for his little brother. LOL.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww I wanna know what happened when they went super saiyan :P
Now to keep reading, I just had to say that ^_^
Now to keep reading, I just had to say that ^_^
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol very cute ^_^ Would you be able to put me on the update list for the sequel? I would really appreciate it, my email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com
I really really enjoyed this story, I would have liked more Goten and Trunks though ^_^ (they are my favourite DBZ pairing) But I totally loved it anyway ^_^
I really really enjoyed this story, I would have liked more Goten and Trunks though ^_^ (they are my favourite DBZ pairing) But I totally loved it anyway ^_^
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this story was totally friggin' awesome! I loved every minute of it and I can't wait to see the sequel. Good luck with ur other stories and, whenever u get around to creating this sequel, just know u have a new fan here to cheer u on.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish to be listed in your email list for the sequel! I loved this story and really hope in the sequel that Piccolo and Gohan get to have a baby, and it would be nice if Trunks and Goten's relationship was talked about a lil more! But can't wait for the next story, hope to read it soon!
Email: inumoon3@yahoo.com
Email: inumoon3@yahoo.com
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! Your writing technique is absolutely amazing and left me wanting more after each chapter. I absolutely cannot wait until you write the sequel.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry for the really late reply to your final chapter. I thought it was really cute and I cannot wait to see a trilogy with this series you have created. I hope to read more from you this summer.
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story, I love the interactions between all of the characters. I never really paid any attention to Piccolo/Gohan, but I really love them in this fic. I hope you haven't gotten too many harassing demands on a sequel, but I would like to add that if you have inspiration enough to write a sequel, I'd love to read it. I'd love to see what you had in store for Piccolo and Gohan, as well as the "Twin Terrors."
Good luck on muses and inspiration and most importantly: Happy Writing!
Good luck on muses and inspiration and most importantly: Happy Writing!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**hug
J-chan
J-chan
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe, cute lil chibis ^__^ i will be watching and waiting for the sequel, good luck with your other fics too!