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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll recharge your batteries before returning to this story series & don't worry take the time you want!
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There were so many sweet moments in this chapter and a a lot of funny ones too. Goku passing out and almost setting himself on fire, the twins ganging up on Roshi, Picollo's needle trick to wake Goku, all had me laughing. Vegeta reassuring Goku over holding Takeo, spooning, bonding, and the feeding of the cubs, were so sweet.
Beautiful end to a lovely story.
I'm looking forward to the epilogue but mainly I can't wait for the sequel :-)
Beautiful end to a lovely story.
I'm looking forward to the epilogue but mainly I can't wait for the sequel :-)
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great! I throughly enjoyed this chapter and yet i am sad that you are going to stop making chapters but hopefully the epilogue will tie any lose ends. Hope to read from you soon.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, what can't Vegeta do? I love this story!!! Please write the next chapter soon.
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG, he's having twins right!? RIGHT!?
LOL...cut off his balls...brilliantly hilarious! LOL
LOL...cut off his balls...brilliantly hilarious! LOL
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o.....CURSE YOU PLOT BUNNIES!
J-chan
J-chan
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Poor Vegeta... Is there one more baby in there? 0_o
I hope you feel better, hun! *hugs you*
Bamseline
I hope you feel better, hun! *hugs you*
Bamseline
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CRUEL! please hurry and put us out of our misery!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EVIL!!!!! I HATE CLIFFIES!!! :( Is it a girl? The story's really good I really enjoy you're story's and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before but I just learned how to do it a little while ago ^_^" so yeah. Don't stop ^^ please *puppy eyes* can't wait for the rst. ^^
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shoot! Some qiffie alright chews on nails* Great chapter, hope everýthing will be ok!?