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Poor Goku having to wait outside, he's a nervous wreck!

What a bloody birth, no wonder Vegeta was threatening Goku's manhood, though it did make me giggle. OMG what is wrong, what can't Vegeta do? How can you leave it like that, I'll never be able to sleep through worrying. Please don't leave us hanging long.

Hope you find out whats wrong and feel better.

What's wrong with Vegeta? I hope he'll be okay. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Ok good villain. Plot bunnies still after you?
J-chan

P.S. Is the gender set? cause surprises rock and you know a fainting Goku is funny!
J-chan

YAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!! Goku showed that crazy bicth!! I'm sooooooo glad that Vegeta is okay. Please write the next chapter.

OMG I love this story. Please update soon. I really want to know if picillo and gohan have a baby as well as when vegeta has hiss. Luv luv this story!!!!

I'm hope that Chi Chi suffers relentlessly. I'm glad Vegeta and the baby are okay. Hurry with the next chapter!!

I just started reading these to fics barely two days ago and just as i read what i thought was the last update you updated again with two new chaps :D I really really love this story please do update again soon :D:D:D

You had my emotions all over the place with this chapter.

When I realised Chichi was out for revenge I had an awful feeling of dread. What was that vile women going to do when Vegeta was so vunerable? Then during the fight when the blade was in his stomach I was sure it hit the baby and Chichi was still coming, nail-biting stuff. I couldn't see a way out but thank Dende he learned that technique!

Goku's solution without killing her was very apt, I hope the dinosaurs find her soon. His relief (and mine) later were so moving, I almost cried with him.

Great chapter!

This is one of the most original & refreshing Goku/Vegeta story I ever read!