rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy this story, and the previous one (AR). Pity Trunks and Goten have grew up... They are so cute when they are chibis! But well, we can replace them by the new coming baby XD To be honest, this Vegeta seems a little to "soft" to me, those hugging and little talk. Stay cool prince! Nobody says cool guys cannot be good mom, err... dad. But still I enjoy the story a lot. Keep going! Looking forward to seeing the prince carrying new baby.

Poor Uub *hugs him*
This story is really addicting! More please! :)

Vegeta was so good with Uub, patiently coaxing the problems out of him, despite wanting Kakarot to himself.

Loved the way of teaching IT, but did it work, and what does Vegeta really want it for? Yes it's a handy technique but I get the feeling Vegeta has a sneaky or sexy plan for it.

Another great two chapters. It was also nice to read your story over break.

HAHAHAHAHAHA! i loved the ending to that chapter, so like Vegeta to scare hercule =D keep the good work up!

freaky leather guy...creepy!

Very funny couple of chapters. I almost wish Vegeta could have punished Goku for leaving him bored, would have been fun to read. Oh well maybe save it for another time.

Was great that Vegeta would have won the tournament but did like Eighteen did. Bout time he won!

I was worried Goku would go with Uub but delighted Vegeta put his foot down. How could he even think about leaving his mate! He's such an airhead at times. Doesn't Goku realise Vegeta is planning on more cubs.

I'm feeling a bit sad because you keep mentioning Epilogue which means it's coming to an end soon and I don't want it to *wails*.

liked how you kept swapping from the sex to Vegeta's memories in this chapter. Nice way to fill in some family history and Vegeta's thoughts/feelings about them. A very loving chapter too showing how much they mean to each other.

So Vegeta is going to try for a baby, assuming Goku agrees, but does he really need to wait years for his next heat? Isn't there a way to trigger it? (Maybe a sexy Saiyan ritual). I just feel sad that he has to wait as he seems so eager, and the baby would help fill the emptiness he's feeling. Plus, I wanna see a pregnant Veggie soon!

This chapter was cute yet sad since Vegeta is lonely without his sons.I am glad that my two fave couples Gohan/Piccolo and Goten/Trunks are in effect and i hope to see more of the former in the future ^_^. Surprisingly, i already read your friend's fave fic and I enjoyed it very much but I can't leave a review since I do not have a real account, but I left her one on fanfiction.net, so I am still very interested in the progression of her story so you both keep up the good work.

...I WANT TO SEE! **peeks at the supers with hair color changes**
J-chan