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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very funny. Just what was needed after the sadness of the last chapter.
I'm still picturing how bad their hair must be, perhaps luminous pink for one and maybe flouresant green or possibly bright orange for the other *dissolves into giggles*
Loved each segment, but especially Explorers and Bad Hair Day.
I'm still picturing how bad their hair must be, perhaps luminous pink for one and maybe flouresant green or possibly bright orange for the other *dissolves into giggles*
Loved each segment, but especially Explorers and Bad Hair Day.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter it was so cute! I cannot wait for the smut.
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**hug**plot bunnies can be rough, I still love you. ^-^
J-chan
J-chan
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
;_; poor Gohan-chan *hugs him* I really hope he get's through this... Please?
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gohan! You rise my Piccolo/Gohan level high then dash in the following chapter XD! It is ookay I still enjoy reading this fic and the actions of the couples.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Gohan. I did wonder last time if he could really wait as he seemed so eager. Hope he can get through the pain, I'm sure Piccolo will do everything he can to help him, and Vegeta will make sure the rest of their family support him too.
I thought Vegeta was wonderful last chapter but he was even better in this one. He really pulled Gohan through when he was in danger of losing his mind, and was so gentle and understanding. It was also touching how he was saddened that he hadn't be able to be as close to Gohan as his other two sons.
Another great chapter even with the sadness.
I thought Vegeta was wonderful last chapter but he was even better in this one. He really pulled Gohan through when he was in danger of losing his mind, and was so gentle and understanding. It was also touching how he was saddened that he hadn't be able to be as close to Gohan as his other two sons.
Another great chapter even with the sadness.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woot! sex for a week.....oww >.<
J-chan
J-chan
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Weeee I love this story! I figured he was building a place for them, because I'm a pimp at figuring out things before they happen. ^_^
Update soon! It's so good!
Update soon! It's so good!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah thanx for the fan service! I hope to see the next chapter and I love your writing style.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter 4, just what I'd hoped for. Goku was so understanding, forcing himself to watch Vegeta's past and feel his pain. Must have been horrible to watch the one you love suffer without being able to help. Great sex afterwards too, what more could I want in a chapter.