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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such stamina these Saiyans. Sex for a whole week, but Piccolo lasted too! He's got hidden talents has that Namek.
Vegeta was wonderful in this chapter when he was talking to Gohan at the start of his heat. Gohan really wanted a baby but wasn't thinking it through, prehaps not thinking at all due to the heat, but Vegeta was his ideal Papa, supportive, informative, and ultimately calming.
Gohan picturing how Vegeta was acting and standing when talking to Piccolo, made me laugh, it was so what I was imagining. Also, Goku defending Vegeta's honor against Piccolo's jokes made me giggle. Don't know why you say you don't do humor often, as you do it really well.
Looking forward to the next update.
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Vegeta was wonderful in this chapter when he was talking to Gohan at the start of his heat. Gohan really wanted a baby but wasn't thinking it through, prehaps not thinking at all due to the heat, but Vegeta was his ideal Papa, supportive, informative, and ultimately calming.
Gohan picturing how Vegeta was acting and standing when talking to Piccolo, made me laugh, it was so what I was imagining. Also, Goku defending Vegeta's honor against Piccolo's jokes made me giggle. Don't know why you say you don't do humor often, as you do it really well.
Looking forward to the next update.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Skee! I have had so many updates today, it makes the world a better place. I like that there soulmates it makes it all the more snuggy
J-chan
J-chan
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter and I hope to see more Piccolo/Gohan in the near future! I love the way you write lemon scenes.
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it Love it
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hiya! I'm new to the DBZ yaoi thing and have to say I NEVER would've picture Piccolo and Gohan together. Very interesting ... but I loooooove Goku and Vegeta. THAT I can see. LOL! is this going to be a multichapter fic?
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. There were so many funny moments in the first half with Vegeta and Piccolo, them tempted to run away, Vegeta smashing his head against the fridge and counter repeatedly, admitting their achilles heels for Sons, many more. I was chuckling.
Then you switched it around and gave us the tension of the confrontation, leaving me bouncing in my seat! I bet Chichi will cause more trouble. Such a nasty women saying those awful things, thankfully Goku stood up for Vegeta. I'm looking forward to Goku getting Vegeta to face his past and of course comforting him.
I'm glad you've started writing again, looks like you have a lot of ideas and more fics to post, oh can't wait!
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Then you switched it around and gave us the tension of the confrontation, leaving me bouncing in my seat! I bet Chichi will cause more trouble. Such a nasty women saying those awful things, thankfully Goku stood up for Vegeta. I'm looking forward to Goku getting Vegeta to face his past and of course comforting him.
I'm glad you've started writing again, looks like you have a lot of ideas and more fics to post, oh can't wait!
xxx
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
***glomp***
J-chan
J-chan
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You have a great writing style and I hope you write more Piccolo and Gohan lemon it was hot and i love the couple.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it this is a really great story.