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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really keeping up the quality! I like how you're not rushing into things and getting the readers emotionally involved with the characters before continuing (poor Ed!). Please continue soon I love it!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ed, you just want to wrap him in a big hug (or is that just me?). I was a little confused at first because the end of chapter 2 had them together sort of but I began to understand as I read further. I love the angst, Ed's always better when he's full of angst. Please update soon.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story keeps getting deeper and deeper and I want to know where it's going so bad. I can believe that Ed would be massively messed up after everything he's been through. I just hope he will be okay in the end.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. MAJOR ANGST ALERT. the truth hurts indeed ey ed *pats little eddy on the head*
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, all I can say is wow!! This is so good, I was in stiches at the way they talked to each other. More please. You can't leave us hanging like this, it's cruel.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated!!! Happy happy happy! Ooo excellent follow on from the first chappy :). The twins were fantastic, they had me giggling, poor geeky Ed...
I'm glad you're not having them sleep together just yet and having the characters (Ed) develop emotionally first, it gives the story depth and makes it a more enjoyable read (can't wait till next chappy!).
Thanks for the fab update and please post again soon, I'll be waiting :).
I'm glad you're not having them sleep together just yet and having the characters (Ed) develop emotionally first, it gives the story depth and makes it a more enjoyable read (can't wait till next chappy!).
Thanks for the fab update and please post again soon, I'll be waiting :).
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! you wrote more! yay!! the twins are awesome and i love it when roy says he and ed shd date them and not each other lol But seriously Ed is so messed up and confused young man. i'm still struggling to understand the depths behind the ed wanting to sleep with roy thing :S *dunce* ah well, some of us are just slow lol Anywho since this seemingly is a series.. PLEASE CONTINUE! i have stopped checking this page regularly buuut i will now so i dont miss how this plays out
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked it :) even though the royed was overtly just the smidgen at the end i really liked the whole story
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! Beautifully written, can't wait until the next installment. I love your take on Ed, its so refresshing :).