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Even the way you write smut is gorgeous. Jesus christ, if I could only write half as good as you. 

hmm, I think Vegeta was just a bit too much of a pussy in this one to be entirely believable. I don't care which is dominant - either is believable to me - but I can't see Vegeta being a spineless schmuck like that. So, maybe an OOC warning would be appropriate? It was well-written, so I'm going to give it a good rating, but I think an OOC warning would be nice.

Really the answer is down to interpretation, especially since they appear heavily reliant on each other, though here I'd still say Goku is topping, despite it being obvious. Goku definitely has a visible control throughout, even when he is supposedly powerless, and at that point he scares Vegeta most. He is also the one to grant Vegeta that privilege. But of course he is also dependant on Vegeta, with Vegeta seems to know, but it seems as though he still perceives himself as submissive despite that. Had this been written in Goku's POV, I may very well have had a different answer. This was delightful to read. I think using Vegeta POV in it really brought out the intensity of his feelings in particular.

Well thats easy.. Kakarott is the top always.. Even bound he gave the orders... And Veggie was a booy slave and followed them... Write more please... I keep comming back to check on this series you have

*grins* i love a good challenge question... and though this one could be presented either way, there is only one true answer to this question. Kakkarot, all the way. if you're really interested in why i say that, even if he was the one chained and whipped, contact me. anyone can, really. i understand this scene rather well.
and coodles to a rather well written piece. i liked it and i really enjoyed the temporary exchange within the situation where you would let the "master" be within chains and whipped. nice take and good touch when dealing with the roles. me likey much. *waves*

I believe Vegeta was top.

"He wants me. He desires me. He is heat and force and overwhelming power."

Me if it was my favorite fanfiction~
um since vegeta acted like a pansy, um not him.
Good story,but why!? why is vegeta a pansy T.T

love it

I think Kakarot was top, even though Vegeta was dominant it was only because Kakarot allowed him to be and Kakarot was in control the whole time. He directed the speed and duration of his whipping never going too far as to need a 'safe' word, and Vegeta didn't get carried away and forget the trust given him. Plus in the end sex Kakarot was most definitely on top.

Nice short intense fic, can't wait for more Pure Evil!
xxx

Who hmmm? This one makes me dizzy. :D There's the knowledge that in D/s the sub is really in charge, but even when chained Kakarott is still Dom... Kakarott was always top here... and Vegeta was a submissive Dom? Ohhhh.... I give up. :P Doesn't matter anyway since it was a good read. (I guess I fail.)