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for First Love

by Desarae

person jaolynn
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this and it was pretty good. I love that you write Vegeta/Pan fan fiction. I thought no one else really liked that type of thing. I think they work great together. Sad ending, but that's okay it was still a good read. =) Hope to see more awesome Vegeta/Pan stuff from you soon.
person Sam
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! the sex scene desired a bit but the rest of the story was fantastic.... it was sad but it had a lot of meaning it showed how vegeta can think i loved it ^_^ bravo

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