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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the natural progression to disovering the reason behind vegeta's denial.
and very in character...how do you do that?
and very in character...how do you do that?
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just like I thought, another great story. Loved it, loved them, loved the rain, loved the kiss ^.^ and no OOC.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet.
I felt for the both of them. Goku's frustration and sadness, Vegeta's denial because of pride and tradition. They were both in character for the most part too.
Is it staying a one-shot, as it would be nice to see where they go from here, how they live together, whether further Saiyan traditions cause problems, and the others reactions?
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I felt for the both of them. Goku's frustration and sadness, Vegeta's denial because of pride and tradition. They were both in character for the most part too.
Is it staying a one-shot, as it would be nice to see where they go from here, how they live together, whether further Saiyan traditions cause problems, and the others reactions?
xxx