rate_review Reviews

yesss i read this elsewhere, it's still excellent.

the lack of banging is very refreshing...and i have a hunch about the anon one-star reviewers...

psst, i think they hate uke vegeta...

too bad goku would NEVER bottom...i mean, right? come on, dbz fans, as if!!! uke vegeta all the way! bossy bottoms are the best.
apparently, so is alliteration...?

arh,evil. I so want to read the next chapter.

That was a bit sad but with a glimmer of hope in the end. I liked how you described their longing for each other without any speech through the whole story, and I could almost taste the hidden passion itching to explode.