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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, please please do a sequel, this was really good. I liked it, and it was very hot. I think it's hard to pull off a good smut scene in 1st person POV, but you really did it well (even though I still think that 1st person usually makes a sex scene awkward, I didn't get that feeling as much with the way you wrote it) ^^
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I LOVED this so much. Awesome writing and I adore how you kept them so IC. *much luffs for you*
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well I must say, a sequel would fit greatly with this story.
I like it though, it made me sad.. poor Duo.
But you must add a sequel after leaving it with them finally together again.
But giving my feedback, as i know authors love it.. i love it too lol.
So please, a sequel for us?
I like it though, it made me sad.. poor Duo.
But you must add a sequel after leaving it with them finally together again.
But giving my feedback, as i know authors love it.. i love it too lol.
So please, a sequel for us?
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this, it tore my heart out to read it, but I loved it. I don't know how you would write a sequel to this, but I would love to read one if you did. This was beautiful and heart wrenching and God I loved it, but I am sure I said that already! Very well written. It's great.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more ppl need to review this. i want a sequel. Perhaps in a different form, i had a bit of a hard time understaning the streem of consciencesness (misspelled i think). Maybe it will be sad, with duo and heero feeling bad and then happy! One can only hope.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story please add more. It really got to me.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please do a sequel! i really wanna know what will happen to Heero and Duo! please?