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JHDLFJKHASDFJASDLKFJASD;FLKJAS;DFJKASD;FJKSAD;LFKJAS;DLKFJAS;DLKFJ *with big puppy dog eyes* when's the next chapter comming out?

Oh no, a healthy chunk of angst. XDDDD

Making out in a bathtub = hot and clean fun.

And OH NOES!! The colonel is a big moron. ;_;

Well, Roy really screwed up didn't he? :D What was he thinking running out on Ed like that? That couldn't have gone worse for him if he tried! XD Can't wait to see how he tries to explain himself now that Ed's found him! Riza was really good here. Roy needed someone to knock some sense in his head! :D

Don't worry about the slow update, I've waited a month before when I updated and yes it made me feel crappy but sometimes it can't be helped. I love how Riza talks to Roy out of the office, just one friend to another and Roy really did need a good telling off. After all he left an ill Ed in a bath all alone and naked, who in their right mind would do that? XD
Update at your lesiure, I'm not going anywhere, I like the story too much :)

I like it, I like the way the scene in chapter 4 went, with Roy sort of zoning out, and Ed in a round about way admitting he loves Roy (in the Narration).

me likey. me likey, want MOOORRRREEE rrraaarrg *foams at mouth* hehe good job. the bathroom scene certainly was hot

You can't leave it there, you must update, now, please...
This chapter was great, it's not moving too fast it's just a good steady pace.
See, good comment, now can I have the next chapter???

"I had to pick! And I chose the military! I chose the military, I chose you over Al!" *hugs you* Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for letting Ed be selfish for once and choose his own happiness over Al's!!! :D You have no idea how happy that made me!!! WHEEE!!! *happy dances* That doesn't happen anywhere near enough for Ed! And seriously, it's not like Al will hate him and never forgive him. Al doesn't hold grudges like that. If you ask me, it was pretty damn selfish of Al to even suggest such a thing! Choose me or else? Jeez! Possessive much? :) I know Al doesn't know about Roy and Ed being together, but to ask Ed to give up his career, the only way of life he's ever known, is asking way too much. Where would they be without the military anyway? *sigh* Obviously Al's not thinking clearly.

The fight scene was great! "DON’T CALL ME SMALL!" LMAO!! Even when delirious with fever Ed still reacts to being called small!! XD Very much looking forward to the bubbles and nice big hot bathtub!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

The second that guy called him small, I just knew nothing would stop Ed kicking the crap out of them. Can't wait for bath time, that should be fun to read.
Sorry I wanted you to be sick, I just wanted more of the story :) Forgive me :P
Update soon please.