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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I'm really enjoying this fic.
I think it's absolutely excellent how you're approaching this very difficult subject matter. VERY few authors have, well, the guts to write something so dark and painful, let alone forcing your readers to actually use their brains for more than three seconds while reading. Yet you do it very well, and with a command of all that makes this story dark and disturbing.
You expect few reviews: well, here's one more. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, some of which actually manage to disrupt the flow of some of your paragraphs. However, I'm more apt to overlook them due to the sheer intensity which you've undertaken and efficiently communicate through your style of writing. It's dark, disturbing, at times very difficult to read. It's brave. And I like that - a lot.
I eagerly await your next chapter.
I think it's absolutely excellent how you're approaching this very difficult subject matter. VERY few authors have, well, the guts to write something so dark and painful, let alone forcing your readers to actually use their brains for more than three seconds while reading. Yet you do it very well, and with a command of all that makes this story dark and disturbing.
You expect few reviews: well, here's one more. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, some of which actually manage to disrupt the flow of some of your paragraphs. However, I'm more apt to overlook them due to the sheer intensity which you've undertaken and efficiently communicate through your style of writing. It's dark, disturbing, at times very difficult to read. It's brave. And I like that - a lot.
I eagerly await your next chapter.
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Major qliffie... i loved that Vegeta steppep up for him... please update again soon. i wanna find out what happens to goten after this.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey you, do you plan on putting more chapters here? I already said how much I love your story, just wanted to see it here, 'cause it's easier to read xD I even recommend you around y'know? I'm your #1 fan in a non-Anne-Wilkes-kinda-way..
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh... for other reviewers who just read this chapter these comments may contain spoilers.
Y'know... I never thought I would like this story so much. And I like you too by what I read in your bio. I just clicked on it 'cause it was about Goten and I adore him. The summary was, well, showing a pretty different from average Goten and I wasn't sure of what to expect. And oh god, your Trunks is so hateable it makes me wish Goten will just go and do all the bad (or good? ;p) thing he wishes to do to him. Yeah, I couldn't wait and went to the Myspace site and read it all, that's why I know Goten's wishes. I loved Zoomie too, wish he's still alive (although I find it highly improbable) Now I hope Goten can find the beautiful foreigner again... and do bad/good things to Trunks. Hope you're still updating regularly :)
Nana
Y'know... I never thought I would like this story so much. And I like you too by what I read in your bio. I just clicked on it 'cause it was about Goten and I adore him. The summary was, well, showing a pretty different from average Goten and I wasn't sure of what to expect. And oh god, your Trunks is so hateable it makes me wish Goten will just go and do all the bad (or good? ;p) thing he wishes to do to him. Yeah, I couldn't wait and went to the Myspace site and read it all, that's why I know Goten's wishes. I loved Zoomie too, wish he's still alive (although I find it highly improbable) Now I hope Goten can find the beautiful foreigner again... and do bad/good things to Trunks. Hope you're still updating regularly :)
Nana