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Wow, a Roy/Ed with a deep plot!!! I can't wait to see more! The email is ultistarmon@hotmail.com

GODS!! This gets better and better as it goes along...but all of your fics do so I am not surprised. You write the little intomate musings of Roy concerning Ed so well you have me wanting to cry for the man. Well done and I am happy to see a little curiousity on Eds part seeping in. I can't wait to hear more of his thoughts on his relationship with Alphons either...

Nice job and great flow as always ^_^

OnyxLight aka Lynx212

Ed's inner turmoil is so well written, you can almost feel his anguish. He wants Roy but he's too scared to admit it.
I love this story and I'm so glad you updated.

Two thoughts run thru my head as I read this. 1 - I have no idea what to say in a review because there is all this heavy anticipation for the other shoe to drop and having all this go straight to hell in the blink of an eye. I am left just waiting with baited breath to see what happens next, too uncertain of anything to know how to respond or react! 2 - Since Ed is 34 now that means it was 1939 when he left the other world (or our world if you prefer) and that means that World War II is on the verge of breaking loose (again with everything going straight to hell) which makes me wonder why in the hell he even 'wants' to go back! Surely he knows about this! The Gate showed him so much that he must know this fact! And really, was his life there so much better than what he could have here? I know, I know. Ed has no control over what happens to him as far as being in this world or the other but, if Ed died in that car accident, then it wouldn't even be possible for him to go back! Death is what opens the Gate in the other world/our world so it's a moot point! (I may be confusing my fictions here but I think that's how it works. I blame/credit hime1999's alter_series if I am.) *heavy sigh* I don't know. I just read this and go, "and then what happens!", like a little kid. :) Just write more. Me and rambling insecurities will be huddled up in a corner waiting for the next chapter! :D
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Add me to the update notice thingy - jill_emory (at) hotmail (dot) com. Thx! :D

A wonderful, satisfying chapter. Your portrayal of Roy and Ed's characters is so engaging. Despite so little happening the tension is almost unbearable at times. I look forward to reading more.

Thank you for the chapter.

i really love this story. The Roy Ed dynamic is perfect. Please update soon.

^^ Very insightful chapter, hun. I can't wait for more!

Ah, this is really great fiction! Wonderful!
So, keep up the great work!! ^^

I really love this story, it's so sweet and gentle and yet in places it's also insightful and deep.
Here's hoping for another quick update.

Oh dear Christ no. Not another story to be obsessed with! I'm just NOW getting over your other one!! Damnit! Why do you have to be so damn brilliant? *jealous, jealous*

I'm so glad that you actually have intellect in your stories. All I see on here is mostly sex, sex, sex... and, well, it IS adultfanfiction, but at least some stories could have planned out ideas to come with them? But all of your stories bring out such emotion, have just the right amount of physical contact and draw people in. I think that's why I love your stories so much.

Ahaha, it's really great to see an emotional side of Roy Mustang. And Ed, although he's 34, still seems childish in some respects... which is true Ed fashion.

Gosh I really can't wait to see what you have in store for us. This will be mind-boggling, won't it?

Can't wait til next time!
Stupefied-Narutard

p.s. Whenever you update ANY of your stories, or come out with a new one, don't fail to e-mail me immediately. shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com