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for Mirrors of Yesterday

by ZaKai

schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, I just realized I hadn't reviewed for this. Either here or at FF ...^^;

Anyway, after long thought about my reactions (you know...^^;) I now want to let you know that I really like this story! (and I was sort of embarrarised to review due to that) But anyway, this is a great introspective piece! The conversation in the bed was really well done. What all late night conversations in bed should be like; full of confessions and bonding XD!

kiki
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! Such an original idea and beautifully written! I love how Ed's older than Mustang in this fic, its so refreshing! Please update soon I can't wait until you do :D.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Please email me updates:
gmasangel@aol.com

Keep writing! Can't wait to see more!!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is so cool!! XD

i have no idea where this plot is going, but i will follow it as zealously as i do your others, because it's, to me, so new and refreshing! it's so cool that ed now gets to see what mustang is really like and how much the man really did help him out. i just hope he doesn't run into his teenaged self. that would be interesting and maybe somewhat terrifying...

i'll be looking forward to the next installment, babe!
person Baroqueangel
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. It's so different from all the other FMA stories I've read. Please mail me when you update sars1@myself.com
Thanx.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, I was hesitant to read this ^^ I'm so glad I did!

I would love to be on the alert list! thelightsshadow@gmail.com

I can't wait for more!

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