rate_review Reviews

Excellent story!!

excellent story. I hope you do more stories for FMA.

Oh but my... that was beyond good. I want more of THAT Ed as soon as you can type it.

I will be able to picture him standing over Mustang, laid out on his desk for the rest of my god give life...

WELL DONE AND ENCORE!!

That was fabulous! So primal and raw. This is one of the hottest stories I've read on this site in a long while. Very well done. I love wicked, mischievous, aggressive Ed! Roy giving in was just...ohhhhh...delicious! "just looking at Ed’s pretty slender young cock and balls in its nest of soft golden curls had escalated the ache in Roy’s own balls yet another notch." I love this line, just the description of Roy thinking of Ed's cock as pretty...yummmy! I sure hope to see more FMA from you. ^_~

Thank you for the wonderful birthday fic my sweet goddess! Best present EVER!

**clapping furiously** oh goddess that was GREAT!! that's one we need to reccomend to a few 'family' members that love yaoi as much as we do poor Af just beat feet to take a cold shower with that one and i just sent her partner in to make sure it's not to cold *grin* poor blood-sib has Mono we hope you do more FMA you've got the reactions right on the money for both of them *grin* keep up the great work

Rysha and Affie
unrepentant YAOI fans
who are going to tell their FOC about this tidbit

Good story. Well written. I cannot believe this is your first FMA story. Well done. I wonder how Ed knew what to do? Is that another story...hahahah just joking. Is this a start for them? Poor Riza....but I do like Ed and Roy together especially in a good well written and plotted story. Thanks. Hope your friend liked their gift.