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Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

awww... i just want to huggle duo and beat heero up side the head for being dense. awesome story!

This is a totally awesome story!!! You are handling the transition beautifully. Keep up the excellent work!!! PLEASE!!! =)

I'm glad duo was wise enough to leave behind his misery. I'm glad Heero returned and had the conscience to feel guilty and sorrow.
But alas, he has to loose someone he took for granted and now it's oto late. A man without emotion but has such unbridled lust and tongue will not make duo happy. Hopefully he learn his lesson, but no doubth, it will be the hard way. Nice fic. I like it more and more.

thanks!

I know you were worried that this kind of story had been done too often, but you did make it your own and it was good. Very nice job. You shouldn't worry that Duo's backstory slowed things down. As readers, we want to know what kinds of things Duo went through as a kid. We want to know what made him into "creature" he is now. I love your Wufei and how he means well, but his blunt manner makes him a bit of an ass. It broke my heart to see Heero act like that, but I believe that was your point. I have the lovely image of Duo crying at the bottom of the pool and I only wish I had some artistic talent and could draw or paint the picture for others. I hope there's more coming and your internet troubles are taken care of.

Sorry to delete this once but I wanted to add something. I was wondering if a bitch slap from a fin would hurt more than a hand. I'm thinking so, especially if it's wet. I can see that leaving a serious mark. Now I can understand Heero being surprised, but come on. Fish my ass... though I suppose that was the problem...

arghhhh!!! how can this be Duo's fault?? how can Heero react that way?
Tro and Wufei didn't say anything and yet Heero who usually don't show emotion blurted all these nonsense!!!!! Duo was right to not tell Heero in the first place. If a person is understanding, he will be understanding no matter what the circumstances is. Duo did not lie. He just didn't tell the truth. What Heero said was not true about Duo ... and Duo had saved his life!!!! ohhh ... i'm angry all right, but not towards the writer ... hehehhe ^ ^

It's ok, Duo, I love you as a fish and Heero is such an ass!
'can't believe i fucked a fish'
how cruel can you get? Duo better not let him back so easily, make Heero work for it, because even if he does apologize, the things he said were painful and anyone in that situation would have a hard time trusting Heero again.

Omg, please update...I think this could possibly be my favorite story at the moment.

I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

Oh boy, that is certainly one big secret.