rate_review Reviews

Loved the story and the way you portrayed the characters. Thanks for writing.

Mmm... I can't remember exactly where I first read this fic, but this was one of the first Yaoi fics I really liked when I started reading DBZ smut some years ago. I have the utmost respect for any author who has the bravery and creativity to explore Vegetasei - so many possibilities, yet so unfortunately easy to butcher. However, don't even think for a second that this fic falls under the latter category. It is excellent from start to finish!

My favorite parts of the entire fic are when the camera pulls back to Vegeta in the present while Goku is busy rewriting history. The building anguish in his dreams, the mounting anger within him... only to be finally releived... mmm... love it.

Excellent story - One of my favourites!

Neat that Trunks can experience Goten with Raditz through his mind, much better than Goten having to describe it. But then getting the real thing in the epilogue was even better. Though it was sad they saw the demise of the planet.

I loved how Vegeta's memories were coming back in blocks, leaving him at first annoyed then confused and scared, torn between continuing to fight or to finally give in to his emotions. Then it leading to the long awaited lemon, which was beautiful.

Moving note from past Vegeta and his final realization of his love for Goku. I'm glad to see though that it hasn't changed his character, he's still the cranky, arrogant prince that we all love.

Feel a bit sad that it's finished but am looking forward to more stories by you. Thanks, it was a wonderful read.

I loved this story! It was fun to read and I'm sad it's over with. I'll be looking for more of your writing!

Great story I'm sad to see it end.

Poor Vegeta. He's so confused. But I have a feeling that Goku has changed his mind. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Goten surprised me there being so dominant with Raditz. I didn't know he had it in him. It seemed to bring out a softer side of Raditz though because of it.

What did the note from Vegeta say? I'm itching to know, and will he show it to future Vegeta?

So sad that they will never see Bardock again. I guess they had to preserve the time line but I wish there was a way for them to meet again.

Good chapter. I'm so intrigued by this story. I'm itching to see how both Goten and Goku interrupted the flow of the future, how their jaunt in the past affected their own time line. Perhaps Bardock is still alive?? And I don't know if there will be any more mention of Raditz, but his escapade with Goten seemed to be more than what it was meant to be (if that makes sense). Looking forward to the next chapter!

Very touching when Bardock saw the photos. How proud he was. He's very clever isn't he, the way he explained all that time travel stuff.

OMG past Vegeta knows! That was so sad when he knew he had to lose him but great lemon to have as a memory.

Future Vegeta seems to be falling for him too but will he admit it?

Ah! I'm itching to read more. This is such a great read. It was slightly disturbing that Goten and Raditz had that rather erotic make out session, but it's something I could see Raditz doing. And now, Bardock knows the truth about Goten and Goku. I can't wait to find out what he thinks and if he helps them to get back home.