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Bit of an awkward morning after for past Vegeta and Goku hehe. Awkward but sweet.

Loved the little insight that Raditz looked a bit like Vegeta. I'm wishing for a King Vegeta/Bardock moment :-)

Raditz seducing Goten was great. Goten certainly didn't seem to mind. Will he prevent Raditz from going further?

Aww future Vegeta is getting desperate to see Kakarot, it's so telling (sniggers). Glad they can speak to Goku, that's opened up so many possibilities. Bardock was so shocked at the end, then when he hugged Goku knowing he was his Kakarotto, I was smiling from ear to ear.

Un man!!! I loved it!!! *jumps up and down* I want more I want more!! ^_^ This is awsome

Oh I really loved it when Goku went Super to stop Vegeta, he was so shocked. But then Goku still had to let him destroy the population and was in so much turmoil at the slaughter. What a choice to have to make!

Lovely lemon and future Vegeta experienced it or was that memories being formed. Interesting.

Oh no Goten mentioned earth! What will Bardock do with this information? Will they go to Earth before they are supposed to and is there a Goku already there?

I have so many questions that I can't wait for more.

Really good! I like how you tie in present day Vegeta's dreams with what's happening to his past self and Goku. It would make sense that as Goku is changing the timeline, Vegeta would be affected by it. I also enjoyed Goten accidentally spilling out that he's from Earth to Bardock. I'm looking forward to finding out what Bardock will do with that information.

Oh wonderful, we get to see future Vegeta's feelings on the matter. He's really desperate to get Goku back isn't he and I think Bulma was right to think he thinks more of Goku than he lets on.

Past Vegeta kissing Goku and awaking both their desires, was very sweet.

But what will Goku do about purging the planet, surely he can't carry it out?

I love this! It's original and captivating and sexy. Write more soon, please! :)

This is a terrific story so far. Goku certainly is in a dilemma, what with having to follow Frieza's orders and purge a planet with Vegeta, which is against code of ethics, and with his hope of not having Vegeta loathe him, even though he is much stronger. I also wonder about Goten...how he's doing as a purger in Frieza's army. That's got to be rough on him too. Looking forward to the next update.

Aww... One of my all-time favorites! Glad to see it -- and YOU -- back again!

So far so good ^_^ Looking forward to more :P

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.