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March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad you are continuing this story :)
Looks like Vegeta has it bad for Goku and is going to act on it, hope Goku is receptive, though I think he may just be confused.
Oh no, has Bulma alerted Frieza by picking up the scouter, and is she really turned on by Nappa or is it just his, ahem, manhood!
Looks like Vegeta has it bad for Goku and is going to act on it, hope Goku is receptive, though I think he may just be confused.
Oh no, has Bulma alerted Frieza by picking up the scouter, and is she really turned on by Nappa or is it just his, ahem, manhood!
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems Vegeta is hogging Goku in the training. I can't blame him but Nappa and Raditz aren't going to get much stronger just fighting each other. Maybe they won't need their help against Frieza. Lets hope so.
So Vegeta has finally accepted his lust for Kakarot. Go get him boy!
Had to laugh at the image of a hen-pecked Nappa at the end :-)
So Vegeta has finally accepted his lust for Kakarot. Go get him boy!
Had to laugh at the image of a hen-pecked Nappa at the end :-)
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you seriously need to go back and edit your first five chapters like you did the rest
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goku's got his work cut out to try and stop Vegeta being so angry as he fights and they don't have long before Frieza!
Well Gohan shocked them didn't he, shame in a real fight he's a bit of a one hit wonder at this stage, but at least it made Raditz warm to Goku.
Well Gohan shocked them didn't he, shame in a real fight he's a bit of a one hit wonder at this stage, but at least it made Raditz warm to Goku.
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Vegeta's having naughty dreams about Goku, wonderful. Sadly though Goku seems to be happy with Chichi. Does he feel anything for Vegeta yet?
I can't wait to see what happens to bring Goku and Vegeta together.
I can't wait to see what happens to bring Goku and Vegeta together.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The paragraphs are more readable now, thanks.
Very realistic portrayal of Chichi, and I laughed as Ginyu got to be a frog again, will Frieza understand him though?
Raditz seems a little bit more accepting of Goku now, but Vegeta wants to kill him. I guess some things never change :-)
Very realistic portrayal of Chichi, and I laughed as Ginyu got to be a frog again, will Frieza understand him though?
Raditz seems a little bit more accepting of Goku now, but Vegeta wants to kill him. I guess some things never change :-)
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you portrayed Bunni, made me laugh, especially them making a window for her.
Hope Raditz and Goku get closer as Raditz seems disgusted with him at the moment. Vegeta cleverly sees his potential and an opportunity to get stronger and beat Frieza. Will the training bring them all together and will Goku accept who he is?
Please update soon.
Hope Raditz and Goku get closer as Raditz seems disgusted with him at the moment. Vegeta cleverly sees his potential and an opportunity to get stronger and beat Frieza. Will the training bring them all together and will Goku accept who he is?
Please update soon.